Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but a bit repetitive and unclear. Try to make your sentences more natural and avoid repeating the same phrase. Also, explain why singing gives you peace and why you think it is cool.

Exemplo: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and feel peaceful. When I sing, I can express my emotions, which makes me feel really good.

Sugestão: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and is a bit confusing. Try to use correct tenses and clearer sentence structure. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: No, I have never taken formal singing lessons, but I watch videos on YouTube and Facebook to try to learn singing by myself.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but very short. Try to add a topic sentence and some supporting details to make your answer more complete and natural.

Exemplo: I want to sing for my family, especially my parents and siblings, because they always support me and I want to make them happy.

Sugestão: Your answer has some pronunciation and grammar issues. Also, try to use linking words and more specific reasons to explain your opinion clearly.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because soft music helps calm the mind and refresh the body, which makes people feel better.

× Yes, I like singing because singing gives me some, because singing gives me peace and so cool.

✓ Yes, I like singing because singing gives me peace and feels so cool.

The phrase 'gives me some' is incomplete and unclear. It should be removed or clarified. Also, 'so cool' is an adjective phrase that needs a verb to connect it properly; 'feels so cool' is correct here.

× No, I never learned how I learned how to sing it, but I'm watching YouTube, Facebook and try to learn how to sing.

✓ No, I never learned how to sing it, but I'm watching YouTube and Facebook and trying to learn how to sing.

The phrase 'how I learned how to sing it' is redundant and incorrect. It should be 'how to sing it'. Also, 'try' should be in the '-ing' form 'trying' to match the present continuous tense with 'I'm watching'.

× No, I never learned how I learned how to sing it, but I'm watching YouTube, Facebook and try to learn how to sing.

✓ No, I never learned how to sing it, but I'm watching YouTube and Facebook and trying to learn how to sing.

The conjunction 'and' should connect 'YouTube' and 'Facebook' properly without a comma. Also, 'watching YouTube, Facebook' is better expressed as 'watching YouTube and Facebook'.

× I think for my family, my parents, my siblings.

✓ I think for my family, my parents, and my siblings.

When listing items, 'and' should be used before the last item to correctly connect the list.

× Yes, I think singing can bring Happ, brings happiness to people because soft music brings some peace in our mind and fresh our body.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because soft music brings some peace to our minds and refreshes our bodies.

The word 'Happ' is a typo and should be 'happiness'. 'Brings' should be consistent with 'can bring' so 'can bring happiness' is correct. Also, 'in our mind' should be 'to our minds' and 'fresh our body' should be 'refreshes our bodies' to use correct prepositions and verb forms.