Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ chưa chính xác, ví dụ như 'thought in a singing competition' nên là 'took part in a singing competition'. Bạn cũng nên tránh lặp lại từ 'remember' và câu trả lời hơi dài dòng, cần ngắn gọn và rõ ràng hơn. Hãy chú ý cấu trúc câu và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. When I was a child, I took part in a singing competition, and my parents were very proud of me. Therefore, I believe singing is beneficial for everyone.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ như 'want to be single' có thể là 'want to be singers'. Bạn cũng lặp lại cụm từ 'enough time' và câu trả lời không mạch lạc. Hãy cố gắng trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ phù hợp với ngữ cảnh.

Exemplo: Although I enjoy singing, I have never taken formal singing lessons because I don't have enough time. I think learning to sing is more important for those who want to become professional singers.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt không tự nhiên, ví dụ như 'wanna' nên dùng 'want to', 'perform in front of all this' không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh dùng từ lặp lại và từ ngữ không chính xác. Hãy trả lời rõ ràng, mạch lạc và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.

Exemplo: When I was a child, I wanted to be a singer and perform on big stages. However, now I prefer to sing only for my parents and family because it feels more comfortable and meaningful.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt và rõ ràng, tuy nhiên bạn có thể sử dụng thêm từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và mở rộng ý hơn một chút. Ngoài ra, hãy chú ý thì của động từ cho phù hợp với ngữ cảnh, ví dụ 'when they are going through hard times'.

Exemplo: Personally, I believe that singing can bring happiness to people because it helps reduce stress and refresh the mind. Moreover, singing can improve mood and create a sense of connection with others during difficult times.

× I remember when I was a child I thought in a singing competition and I remember my parents really applause me at that competition.

✓ I remember when I was a child I took part in a singing competition and I remember my parents really applauded me at that competition.

The verb 'thought' is incorrect here; the correct past tense verb is 'took part' or 'participated'. Also, 'applause' is a noun, so the verb form 'applauded' should be used to describe the action. This correction ensures proper past tense usage and verb form.

× I remember my parents really applause me at that competition.

✓ I remember my parents really applauded me at that competition.

The verb 'applause' is a noun, so it cannot be used as a verb with 'me'. The correct verb form is 'applauded' and it should be followed by the object pronoun 'me' to indicate who received the applause.

× I think it's just better for some people who want to be single or who want to be professional.

✓ I think it's just better for some people who want to be singers or who want to be professionals.

The word 'single' is incorrect in this context; the intended meaning is likely 'singer'. Also, 'professional' should be pluralized to 'professionals' to match the plural subject 'some people'. Modal verb usage is correct but the nouns need correction.

× When I was a child, I wanna be a singer and I used to think that, uh, perform in front of all this and it's really cool.

✓ When I was a child, I wanted to be a singer and I used to think that performing in front of all these people was really cool.

'Wanna' is informal and incorrect in past tense; it should be 'wanted to'. The phrase 'perform in front of all this' is incomplete and incorrect; it should be 'performing in front of all these people'. Also, the verb tense should be consistent in past tense.

× But uh, being, uh, I do make me change my mind and I just only wanna sing in front of my parents and my family.

✓ But, uh, being, uh, I did change my mind and I just only want to sing in front of my parents and my family.

The phrase 'I do make me change my mind' is incorrect. The correct form is 'I did change my mind'. Also, 'wanna' should be 'want to' for formal correctness. The reflexive pronoun 'me' is incorrectly used here.

× The reason is that singing can make them reduce stress and refresh their mind when they were in a hard time.

✓ The reason is that singing can help them reduce stress and refresh their minds when they are going through a hard time.

The phrase 'when they were in a hard time' is incorrect; it should be 'when they are going through a hard time' to indicate a general condition. Also, 'refresh their mind' should be plural 'minds' to agree with 'them'. The verb tense should be present to match the general truth.