Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is quite repetitive and unclear, which affects the natural flow and effectiveness. Try to give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons using linking words. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax and improves my mood. For example, when I sing my favourite songs, I feel calm and happy.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and incomplete, with grammatical mistakes and repetition. Make sure to answer directly, complete your thoughts, and use linking words to explain your experience clearly.

Exemplo: Yes, I started learning to sing when I was at secondary school because I had to prepare for a music exam. Later, I took lessons from a professional teacher, but I didn't enjoy that style of singing.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat confusing and contains errors. Try to organise your ideas clearly, use correct vocabulary, and link your points logically to express who you want to sing for.

Exemplo: Firstly, I like to sing for myself because it helps me relax and enjoy the moment. Additionally, I enjoy singing for my family as it brings us closer together.

Sugestão: Your answer lacks clarity and is incomplete. Use complete sentences, avoid repetition, and explain your ideas clearly with examples and linking words.

Exemplo: Yes, singing beautiful songs can definitely bring happiness and positive emotions to people. However, sometimes loud or noisy music, like metro music, can be disturbing and unpleasant.

× Yes, I like singing because when I'm singing it can't let me feel so good.

✓ Yes, I like singing because when I sing, it makes me feel so good.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'can't let me feel' which is not appropriate here. The verb 'make' is used to express causing a feeling, and 'singing' should be in simple present tense 'sing' to match the habitual action. Also, 'when I'm singing' is better as 'when I sing' for general statements.

× And it can.

✓ And it can.

This sentence fragment 'And it can.' is incomplete and unclear. It should be connected to the previous or next sentence for clarity, but as per instructions, only grammar mistakes from the list are corrected. No correction needed here.

× And music can bring a good emotion emotion to me and it will can let me feel relaxed and calm down and feel pleasure.

✓ And music can bring good emotions to me and it can let me feel relaxed, calm, and pleased.

The phrase 'a good emotion emotion' is redundant and incorrect; 'good emotions' is appropriate. 'Will can' is incorrect modal verb usage; only one modal verb should be used, here 'can' suffices. Also, 'calm down' is a phrasal verb meaning to become calm, but here 'calm' as an adjective fits better. 'Feel pleasure' is better expressed as 'feel pleased' or 'feel pleasure' but 'feel pleased' is more natural.

× Yes, I was start start to learn how to sing when I was in our scenery school because I have to pack the exam with the music.

✓ Yes, I started to learn how to sing when I was in our secondary school because I had to pass the exam with music.

'Was start start' is incorrect; the past tense 'started' should be used. 'Scenery school' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'secondary school'. 'Have to pack the exam' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'had to pass the exam'. The tense should be past to match the time frame.

× Then I start to sing with a professional professional so but I don't like singing that style because.

✓ Then I started to sing with a professional, but I didn't like singing in that style because...

'Start' should be in past tense 'started' to match the past context. 'Professional professional' is a repetition error; only one 'professional' is needed. The sentence is incomplete but corrected for grammar. 'Don't like' should be 'didn't like' to maintain past tense consistency.

× Actually, the first of all, I want to think for myself because I enjoy to sing for my by myself.

✓ Actually, first of all, I want to think for myself because I enjoy singing by myself.

'The first of all' is incorrect; 'first of all' is the correct phrase. 'Enjoy to sing' is incorrect; 'enjoy' is followed by the gerund form 'singing'. 'For my by myself' is incorrect; 'by myself' suffices without 'for my'.

× It was a a good way to let me feel calm down and let me feel pleasure.

✓ It was a good way to help me calm down and feel pleasure.

'Let me feel calm down' is incorrect; 'help me calm down' is more appropriate. 'Let me feel pleasure' is awkward; 'feel pleasure' is acceptable but 'help me feel pleasure' is better. Also, 'a a' is a repetition error.

× And I also want to speak for us.

✓ And I also want to sing for us.

The original sentence 'I also want to speak for us' is likely a misstatement; context suggests 'sing' is intended. 'Speak for us' is incorrect in this context.

× I also want to sing to my family.

✓ I also want to sing for my family.

The correct preposition with 'sing' when indicating the audience is 'for', not 'to'.

× Yes sing a beautiful song or definitely can bring the good emotion or good feels to people and but if sometimes like the metro music it will so noisy and will be made the people feel so.

✓ Yes, singing a beautiful song can definitely bring good emotions or good feelings to people, but sometimes, like metro music, it can be so noisy and make people feel uncomfortable.

'Yes sing a beautiful song or definitely can bring' is ungrammatical; 'singing a beautiful song can definitely bring' is correct. 'Good emotion or good feels' should be 'good emotions or good feelings'. 'Will so noisy' is incorrect; 'can be so noisy' is correct. 'Will be made the people feel so' is incorrect; 'make people feel uncomfortable' is appropriate.