Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by correcting grammar, avoiding redundancy, and using linking words for coherence. For example, instead of 'make my mood happy and however I feel stressed or bored', you could say 'it lifts my mood whenever I feel stressed or bored'. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas and keep sentences concise.

Exemplo: Yes, I like singing because it gives me peace of mind and lifts my mood whenever I feel stressed or bored. I usually sing romantic songs for myself. For instance, last night I sang for 10 minutes, which made me feel very happy and relaxed.

Sugestão: Your answer needs clearer structure and grammar correction. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, say 'I have never learned singing professionally, but I am very interested in it. If I get a chance, I would like to learn properly because I want to make singing my career. For instance, I hope to join a singing band in the future.'

Exemplo: I have never learned singing professionally, but I am very interested in it. If I get a chance, I would like to learn properly because I want to make singing my career. For example, I hope to join a singing band in the future.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting grammar and using linking words for better flow. For example, instead of 'he becomes so happy and relaxed whenever I sing', say 'he becomes very happy and relaxed whenever I sing for him'. Also, avoid unnecessary phrases like 'Oh interesting question, I like it'.

Exemplo: I love to sing for my son because he enjoys listening to music, especially slow and soothing songs. Therefore, I want to learn more music to sing for him. Whenever I sing for him, he becomes very happy and relaxed.

Sugestão: Your answer conveys the idea but can be improved by using clearer language and better sentence structure. Avoid redundancy and use linking words. For example, say 'Yes, I believe singing is a good therapy that can make people happy. Instead of wasting time on phones, I suggest everyone sing songs that personally make them happy, as it helps relieve stress and improve mood.'

Exemplo: Yes, I believe singing is a good therapy that can make people happy. Instead of wasting time on phones, I suggest everyone sing songs that personally make them happy, as it helps relieve stress and improve mood.

× Yes of course I like singing because it gives me Peace of Mind and make my mood happy and however I feel stressed or bored.

✓ Yes of course I like singing because it gives me peace of mind and makes my mood happy whenever I feel stressed or bored.

The verb 'make' should be in the third person singular form 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'however' is incorrectly used; 'whenever' fits better to express the condition when feeling stressed or bored.

× For example last night I sing for 10 minutes and it makes my mood so beautiful and nice.

✓ For example, last night I sang for 10 minutes and it made my mood so beautiful and nice.

The verb 'sing' should be in the past tense 'sang' to match the past time reference 'last night'. Similarly, 'makes' should be 'made' to maintain past tense consistency.

× Well, I must say no, I never learned singing, but I'm very interested in singing.

✓ Well, I must say no, I have never learned singing, but I'm very interested in singing.

The present perfect tense 'have never learned' is more appropriate here to indicate an experience up to now rather than a simple past action.

× So if I get a chance to learn proper professional thinking, I can, because I want singing, my career, my profession.

✓ So if I get a chance to learn proper professional singing, I can, because I want singing as my career, my profession.

The phrase 'proper professional thinking' is incorrect; it should be 'proper professional singing'. Also, 'want singing' needs 'as' to clarify the intention of making singing a career.

× For example, I want to join some singing band in future. For that I definitely take.

✓ For example, I want to join some singing band in the future. For that, I will definitely take lessons.

The phrase 'in future' should be 'in the future' with the definite article. The sentence 'For that I definitely take' is incomplete and unclear; adding 'I will definitely take lessons' clarifies the future intention.

× Oh interesting question, I like it. I love to sing for my son because he's very much interested in listening music so I want to learn the music and sing for him as he like the slow soothing music.

✓ Oh, interesting question, I like it. I love to sing for my son because he's very much interested in listening to music, so I want to learn the music and sing for him as he likes slow soothing music.

The phrase 'interested in listening music' should be 'interested in listening to music' as 'listen' requires the preposition 'to'. Also, 'he like' should be 'he likes' to agree with third person singular subject.

× And I always used to sing for my son and he becomes so happy and relaxed whenever I sing.

✓ And I always used to sing for my son and he becomes so happy and relaxed whenever I sing.

The sentence is mostly correct; 'used to sing' indicates past habitual action, and 'he becomes' is present tense describing current reaction. No correction needed here.

× Instead of wasting time in phones crawling up and down in some finding websites, I must suggest everybody to sing song which makes you happy personally and which can relieve your stress and makes your mood.

✓ Instead of wasting time on phones, scrolling up and down some websites, I must suggest everybody sing songs which make you happy personally and which can relieve your stress and improve your mood.

The phrase 'wasting time in phones' should be 'wasting time on phones'. 'Crawling' is incorrect; 'scrolling' is appropriate for navigating websites. 'Finding websites' is unclear and omitted. 'Sing song' should be 'sing songs'. 'Makes your mood' is vague; 'improve your mood' is clearer.