Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但语法和用词需要改进。注意动词形式（like to sing而不是like to singing），并且句子结构可以更自然流畅。建议使用更准确的时态和连接词，使表达更连贯。

Exemplo: Yes, I like to sing because it helps me remember the good things in my life and always puts me in a good mood.

Sugestão: 回答内容较丰富，但表达有些口语化且不够连贯。建议使用更正式的表达，避免重复，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

Exemplo: I haven't taken formal singing lessons because they are expensive, but I have taught myself by using online music apps and practicing shadowing.

Sugestão: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用正确的语法和连接词。

Exemplo: I want to sing for my parents and family because I love them. Even though I'm not a good singer, I know they will enjoy my singing and not criticize me.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用更准确的句子结构，避免重复，并清楚表达观点。

Exemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it makes people feel excited and joyful from within their hearts.

× Yes, I like to singing.

✓ Yes, I like singing.

The verb 'like' is followed by either the gerund (verb + -ing) or the infinitive without 'to'. 'Like to singing' is incorrect because 'to' should not be used before the gerund form. The correct form is 'like singing'. This is a common error in verb patterns.

× I always in the good mood.

✓ I am always in a good mood.

The sentence lacks the verb 'am' which is necessary to complete the sentence structure. Also, 'the good mood' should be 'a good mood' because it refers to a general state, not a specific one. The correct sentence is 'I am always in a good mood.'

× if I want to learn how to sing, I need to pay and I don't have much money.

✓ if I want to learn how to sing, I need to pay, but I don't have much money.

The sentence is missing a conjunction to connect two independent clauses properly. Using 'but' clarifies the contrast between needing to pay and not having money. This improves sentence coherence and grammar.

× But I learned, I did learn by myself, just online.

✓ But I learned, I did learn by myself, just online.

This sentence is grammatically correct in past tense usage. No correction needed.

× Like do the shadowing.

✓ Like doing shadowing.

After 'like', the gerund form 'doing' should be used instead of the base verb 'do'. Also, 'the shadowing' can be simplified to 'shadowing' as it refers to the activity in general.

× If I if I was saying even though I'm not a good singer, I want to sing for them 'cause I know they will not complain me, they will not say I'm not a good singer, they will enjoy.

✓ If I was singing even though I'm not a good singer, I want to sing for them because I know they will not complain about me, they will not say I'm not a good singer, they will enjoy it.

The phrase 'if I was saying' is incorrect; it should be 'if I was singing' to match the context. Also, 'complain me' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'complain about me'. Adding 'it' after 'enjoy' clarifies what they will enjoy. These corrections fix pronoun and verb usage errors.

× when people singing they will feel great from the IT.

✓ when people sing, they will feel great from it.

After 'when', the base form of the verb 'sing' should be used, not the gerund 'singing'. Also, 'the IT' is incorrect; it should be 'it' without 'the'. This corrects verb form and article usage.

× It's like the feeling from inside of their body.

✓ It's like the feeling inside their body.

The phrase 'from inside of' is redundant. The correct prepositional phrase is 'inside their body'. This simplifies and corrects the preposition usage.

× So it's the same they will if they say also will bring the happiness to them.

✓ So it's the same; if they say so, it will also bring happiness to them.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. Reordering and adding necessary words like 'so' and punctuation clarifies the meaning and corrects sentence structure.