Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có ví dụ minh họa, nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp và từ vựng chính xác hơn, tránh lỗi như 'lift' nên là 'lifts', 'prusty' không đúng từ, nên dùng 'positive' hoặc 'happy'. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và chính xác hơn.

Exemplo: Honestly, I really enjoy singing because it helps me feel relaxed after a long day. For example, when I sing my favorite song, it boosts my energy and lifts my mood, making me feel more positive and refreshed.

Sugestão: Bạn trả lời có nội dung nhưng câu hơi dài và có lỗi ngữ pháp như 'upon different music classes' không chính xác, nên dùng 'in different music classes'. Ngoài ra, tránh lặp từ như 'singing singing'. Hãy sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và dùng liên từ phù hợp để câu mạch lạc hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, I think almost everyone learns how to sing when they are children in different music classes at school. For example, I remember practicing simple songs with my classmates, which helped me improve my singing skills.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng tốt nhưng có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp như 'it's feel like a buffet' không đúng, có thể bạn muốn nói 'it's like a private and relaxing space'. Hãy chú ý dùng từ đúng và câu ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và lỗi ngữ pháp.

Exemplo: Maybe I'm different from most people because I usually prefer to sing for myself. For example, I often sing when I go to the bathroom because it's like a private and relaxing space where I can enjoy singing without worrying about others.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng nhưng nhiều lỗi nghiêm trọng về ngữ pháp và từ vựng như 'Simon' thay vì 'singing', 'seeing it' không đúng, câu không hoàn chỉnh 'Whenever I sing a few more joyful and less stressed'. Hãy chú ý phát âm, ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời rõ ràng và chính xác hơn.

Exemplo: In my opinion, singing can definitely bring happiness to people. For me, it is one of the best ways to relax and express my emotions. Whenever I sing, I feel more joyful and less stressed. So, I think singing plays an important role in my life.

× For example, when I sing my favorite song, it boosts my energy and lift my mood, make me feel more prusty and refreshed.

✓ For example, when I sing my favorite song, it boosts my energy and lifts my mood, making me feel more trusty and refreshed.

The verbs 'lift' and 'make' should be in the third person singular form 'lifts' and the present participle form 'making' respectively to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'prusty' seems to be a typo and is corrected to 'trusty'.

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

The past participle 'learnt' is acceptable in British English, but 'learned' is more common in American English. Both are correct, but consistency is important.

× I think almost everyone learns how to sing when they are children upon different music classes at school.

✓ I think almost everyone learns how to sing when they are children through different music classes at school.

The preposition 'upon' is incorrect here; 'through' is the correct preposition to indicate the means by which something is learned.

× I remember practicing simple song with my classmate which helped me improve my singing singing skills.

✓ I remember practicing simple songs with my classmates which helped me improve my singing skills.

The nouns 'song' and 'classmate' should be plural to agree with the context. Also, 'singing' is repeated twice unnecessarily.

× Maybe I'm different from most people because I usually prefer to sing for myself.

✓ Maybe I'm different from most people because I usually prefer to sing to myself.

The correct preposition to use with 'sing' in this context is 'to' rather than 'for'.

× For example, I often sing when I go to the bathroom because it's feel like a buffet and relaxing space where I can enjoy singing without worry about all this without worrying.

✓ For example, I often sing when I go to the bathroom because it feels like a quiet and relaxing space where I can enjoy singing without worrying about anything.

The verb 'feel' should be 'feels' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. 'Buffet' is incorrect in this context and replaced with 'quiet'. The phrase 'without worry about all this without worrying' is redundant and corrected to 'without worrying about anything'.

× In my opinion, Simon can definitely bring happiness to people.

✓ In my opinion, singing can definitely bring happiness to people.

'Simon' is a typo and should be 'singing' to make sense in the context.

× For me, seeing it is one of the best way to relax and impress my emotions.

✓ For me, singing is one of the best ways to relax and express my emotions.

'Seeing it' is incorrect; it should be 'singing'. 'Way' should be plural 'ways' to agree with 'one of the'. 'Impress my emotions' is incorrect and replaced with 'express my emotions'.

× Whenever I sing a few more joyful and less stressed.

✓ Whenever I sing, I feel more joyful and less stressed.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a main verb. The correction adds 'I feel' to complete the sentence.

× So I think it's play an important role in my life.

✓ So I think it plays an important role in my life.

The verb 'play' should be in third person singular 'plays' to agree with 'it'. The contraction 'it's' should be 'it' to fit the sentence structure.