Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to avoid repeating the same idea with different words (e.g., 'relieve my stress' and 'stressbuster activity'). Also, you can add a linking word to connect your ideas smoothly and make your answer more natural.

Exemplo: Yes, I love to sing because it helps me relieve stress and express my emotions. Moreover, singing is a great way to relax and feel happy.

Sugestão: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and unclear phrases, such as 'music play system' and 'practice for a practice how to sing daily'. Try to use correct sentence structures and clearer expressions. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Exemplo: Yes, I learnt how to sing when I was a child. I was part of the school's music club, and we practiced regularly, which helped me develop my hobby. Even now, I practice singing daily to improve my skills.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting the verb tense and adding a linking word to explain why you want to sing for them. This will make your answer more coherent and natural.

Exemplo: Well, I want to sing for my family and friends because they have always supported me and stood by my side.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but contains repetition and some grammatical errors. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid repeating the same points. Also, use correct verb tenses and sentence structures for clarity.

Exemplo: Yes, singing can bring happiness to everyone. For example, some people sing in the shower or in the car to express their emotions. Moreover, singing helps relieve stress and relax the mind, which contributes to happiness.

× Yes, I have learnt how to sing in my childhood.

✓ Yes, I learnt how to sing in my childhood.

The use of present perfect 'have learnt' is incorrect with a specific past time 'in my childhood'. Simple past 'learnt' should be used for actions completed in the past at a definite time.

× When I was young, I was the part of music play system in my school.

✓ When I was young, I was part of the music play system in my school.

The article 'the' before 'part' is unnecessary and 'music play system' needs the definite article 'the' to specify the system. Also, 'was the part' is incorrect; it should be 'was part'.

× We used to practice regularly and that made my hobby.

✓ We used to practice regularly and that became my hobby.

The phrase 'made my hobby' is awkward; 'became my hobby' correctly expresses the development of a hobby over time.

× Even nowadays I used to practice for a practice how to sing daily as as my hobby.

✓ Even nowadays, I practice singing daily as my hobby.

'Used to' indicates past habits and is incorrect for present habits. Also, 'practice for a practice how to sing' is awkward and redundant; 'practice singing' is correct.

× Well, I want to sing for my family and my friends who always supported me and stand by my side.

✓ Well, I want to sing for my family and my friends who have always supported me and stood by my side.

The verbs 'supported' and 'stand' need to be consistent in tense. Since the support is ongoing, present perfect 'have supported' and past participle 'stood' are appropriate.

× Some people used to sing in the shower or some people used to sing in the car to express their feelings, emotions as well as singing is a stressbuster activity which relieves the stress and relax the mind so it also so it always bring the happiness to each and every person.

✓ Some people sing in the shower or in the car to express their feelings and emotions. Singing is also a stressbuster activity which relieves stress and relaxes the mind, so it always brings happiness to every person.

'Used to' indicates past habits, but the sentence refers to general truths, so simple present tense 'sing' is correct. Also, subject-verb agreement errors like 'relax' instead of 'relaxes' and 'bring' instead of 'brings' are corrected. Sentence structure is improved for clarity.