Singing— Part 1 Relatório
Conversa
Part 1
Examinador
Do you like singing? Why?
Candidato
Yes, definitely. Singing is one of the things that I like doing the most whenever I got the chance. I sing when I'm alone in my room. I sing when I'm in the shower. I sing when I'm working. And yeah, I think singing is a great way for you to relieve stress and, you know, to ease your mind and relax.
Examinador
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Candidato
No, I've actually never taken any formal singing lessons as even though I love singing in my free time, like I said earlier, I think learning professional singing lessons is only for people who are interested in building their career, pursuing their career as a singer. So yeah, even though.
Examinador
Who do you want to sing for?
Candidato
Even though I love singing and I sing whenever I can, I'm pretty shy and I'm not that confident to sing in front of others. I would much prefer to just sing to myself when I'm in the shower or when I'm commuting to work. Like it is a way to help me to reduce stress and to not being judged by.
Examinador
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Candidato
Yes, definitely. I think singing is the way to express your emotions, express your characteristics. And yes, it is definitely a very effective way for you to reduce stress to, you know, ease your mind and let your hair out.
Avaliação
Total
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
Pontuação: 85.0Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và hiệu quả, tuy nhiên bạn nên tránh lặp lại quá nhiều lần "I sing when..." để câu trả lời ngắn gọn và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn cũng nên sử dụng các từ nối để làm cho câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.
Exemplo: Yes, definitely. Singing is one of my favorite activities whenever I get the chance. For instance, I often sing alone in my room, in the shower, or even while working. I find that singing helps me relieve stress and relax my mind.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi trước, sau đó mới giải thích thêm. Câu trả lời hiện tại hơi dài dòng và chưa hoàn chỉnh. Hãy tránh sử dụng các cụm từ không cần thiết như "like I said earlier" và kết thúc câu một cách rõ ràng.
Exemplo: No, I have never taken formal singing lessons because I only sing for fun. I believe professional lessons are more suitable for those who want to pursue a career in singing.
Who do you want to sing for?
Pontuação: 75.0Sugestão: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi "Who do you want to sing for?" trước, sau đó mới giải thích lý do. Câu trả lời hiện tại thiếu câu chủ đề rõ ràng và kết thúc chưa hoàn chỉnh. Hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
Exemplo: I prefer to sing for myself rather than for others because I am quite shy and lack confidence. Singing alone, such as in the shower or during my commute, helps me reduce stress without worrying about being judged.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Pontuação: 80.0Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng bạn nên tránh sử dụng các cụm từ không chính thức như "you know" và "let your hair out" trong bài thi. Hãy sử dụng từ vựng trang trọng hơn và cung cấp thêm ví dụ cụ thể để làm rõ ý.
Exemplo: Yes, definitely. Singing allows people to express their emotions and personality. Moreover, it is an effective way to reduce stress and improve overall happiness.
Gramática
× I like doing the most whenever I got the chance.
✓ I like doing the most whenever I get the chance.
The verb 'got' is in the past tense, but the sentence refers to a habitual action, so the present tense 'get' should be used instead.
× I think learning professional singing lessons is only for people who are interested in building their career, pursuing their career as a singer.
✓ I think taking professional singing lessons is only for people who are interested in building their career, pursuing their career as a singer.
The phrase 'learning professional singing lessons' is incorrect; 'taking professional singing lessons' is the correct collocation when referring to attending lessons.
× Like it is a way to help me to reduce stress and to not being judged by.
✓ Like it is a way to help me reduce stress and to avoid being judged by others.
The phrase 'to not being judged by' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'to avoid being judged by others' to complete the meaning and correct verb form.
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