Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 你的回答中多次出现了“seeing”而非“singing”，这是发音或拼写错误，影响了表达的清晰度。建议注意发音和拼写的准确性。此外，回答中有重复表达“not good and not good”，应避免冗余。可以尝试用更自然的表达方式，并且简洁明了地说明原因。

Exemplo: No, I don't really like singing because I feel shy when I sing in front of others. Also, I think my singing voice is not very good, so I usually avoid singing in public. For example, even at family gatherings, I prefer to listen rather than sing.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误，如“sing song”和“in the senior of high school”，应改为更自然的表达。此外，句子结构可以更清晰，使用连接词使内容更连贯。建议加强语法和句型的准确性。

Exemplo: Yes, I started learning how to sing when I was a senior in high school. I attended after-school singing lessons because I wanted to improve my voice. Although it was quite challenging at first and I didn't progress very quickly, the experience was helpful.

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“sing some of my friends”应为“sing for some of my friends”，且代词使用混乱。建议注意主谓一致和代词的正确使用，同时简化句子结构，使表达更自然流畅。

Exemplo: I want to sing for one of my friends because she really enjoys listening to my songs. Even though my voice is not very good, she always encourages me and praises my efforts, which makes me feel confident and happy. Her support motivates me to keep practicing and improve my singing skills.

Sugestão: 回答中多次错误使用“seeing”代替“singing”，且句子结构不完整，如“it has been impress my emotions”和“can left people surprise”语法错误较多。建议加强基础语法和词汇的准确使用，避免拼写错误。

Exemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. When I sing, I feel joyful and relaxed because it helps me express my emotions. Singing also creates a positive atmosphere that can surprise and delight others.

× No, I don't really like seeing some because I feel quite shy when I sing in front of others.

✓ No, I don't really like singing because I feel quite shy when I sing in front of others.

这里的动词应该用动名词形式'singing'，而不是'seeing'。'like'后面接动名词表示喜欢做某事。

× Also I think my seeing voice is not good and not good, so I usually avoid singing in public.

✓ Also I think my singing voice is not good, so I usually avoid singing in public.

'seeing voice'是错误的表达，应为'singing voice'。另外，重复的'not good'应去掉一个，保持句子简洁。

× For example, even at family greetings I prefer to listen rather than singing.

✓ For example, even at family gatherings I prefer to listen rather than sing.

'family greetings'应为'family gatherings'，表示家庭聚会。'prefer to listen rather than singing'中，'rather than'后面应接动词原形'sing'，而不是动名词。

× Yes, I started learning how to sing song when I was in the senior of high school.

✓ Yes, I started learning how to sing songs when I was a senior in high school.

'sing song'应为'sing songs'，复数形式。'in the senior of high school'应改为'a senior in high school'，表示高中高年级学生。

× I attend after school singing lessons because I wanted to improve my voice, but I found it quite different and didn't progress very well at first.

✓ I attended after-school singing lessons because I wanted to improve my voice, but I found it quite difficult and didn't progress very well at first.

时态应为过去式'attended'，'after school'应用连字符'after-school'作形容词。'quite different'用词不当，应为'quite difficult'表示难度。

× I want to sing some of my friends because she really enjoys listening to my songs.

✓ I want to sing for some of my friends because they really enjoy listening to my songs.

'sing some of my friends'缺少介词，应为'sing for some of my friends'。'she'指代不明确，'some friends'为复数，应使用'they'。

× Even though my voice is not very good, she always encourage me and praises me my effort which makes me feel confident and happy.

✓ Even though my voice is not very good, she always encourages me and praises my effort, which makes me feel confident and happy.

主语'she'为第三人称单数，动词应加's'，即'encourages'。'praises me my effort'结构错误，应为'praises my effort'。

× She her support me to keep practicing and improve my singing skills.

✓ She supports me to keep practicing and improve my singing skills.

'She her support me'中多余的'her'应去掉。动词'support'应加's'，因为主语是第三人称单数。

× Yes, I believe seeing can bring happiness to people.

✓ Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people.

'seeing'应为'singing'，因为上下文讨论的是唱歌。

× When I sing, I feel very joyful and relaxed because it has been impress my emotions.

✓ When I sing, I feel very joyful and relaxed because it impresses my emotions.

'has been impress'时态和结构错误，应为一般现在时'impresses'，主语'it'指代唱歌。

× Seeing also creates a positive atmosphere which can left people surprise.

✓ Singing also creates a positive atmosphere which can leave people surprised.

'Seeing'应为'singing'。'can left'应为'can leave'，动词原形。'people surprise'应为'people surprised'，形容词形式。