Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và trả lời đúng trọng tâm câu hỏi. Tuy nhiên, bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp, ví dụ như "help" nên là "helps" để phù hợp với chủ ngữ số ít. Ngoài ra, bạn có thể thêm một câu ví dụ cụ thể để làm câu trả lời sinh động hơn.

Exemplo: I like singing because I believe that it is an activity that helps people to relax and relieve stress after a long day of work. For example, after a tiring day, I often sing my favorite songs to feel more relaxed.

Sugestão: Bạn trả lời rõ ràng và có cấu trúc tốt. Tuy nhiên, câu "I have worked a lot of tutorials" không chính xác về ngữ pháp, nên dùng "I have watched a lot of tutorials". Bạn cũng có thể thêm một câu để giải thích thêm về hiệu quả của việc học qua video.

Exemplo: To be honest, I haven't gone to any singing classes but I have watched a lot of tutorials on TikTok or YouTube which teach people how to sing correctly. These videos have helped me improve my pitch and breathing techniques.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý rõ ràng nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp như "listen my voice" nên là "listen to my voice". Bạn cũng nên dùng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ như "just" hai lần.

Exemplo: To be honest, I usually sing for myself because I feel very shy when singing in front of many people. However, my family and close friends are always willing to listen to my voice.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tốt nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp như "after learning work" nên là "after a long day of work" và "enjoy joyful" không đúng. Bạn nên sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn và dùng từ vựng chính xác hơn.

Exemplo: I believe that singing brings happiness because it is very relaxing and helps people relieve stress after a long day of work. Moreover, singing with friends is enjoyable and creates joyful moments.

× I like singing because I believe that it is an activity that help people to relax and relieve stress after a long day of work.

✓ I like singing because I believe that it is an activity that helps people to relax and relieve stress after a long day of work.

The verb 'help' should be in the third person singular form 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'activity'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue related to singular and plural forms.

× I haven't gone to any singing classes but I have worked a lot of tutorials on TikTok or YouTube which teach people how to sing correctly.

✓ I haven't gone to any singing classes but I have watched a lot of tutorials on TikTok or YouTube which teach people how to sing correctly.

The verb 'worked' is incorrect here because 'tutorials' are watched, not worked on. The correct past participle is 'watched'. This is a past tense usage error.

× But there are just my family and my close friends who are ready to listen my voice.

✓ But there are just my family and my close friends who are ready to listen to my voice.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' before the object. Omitting 'to' is a preposition error.

× I believe that happiness will come to people when they are singing because singing is very relaxing and helps people to relieve stress after learning work.

✓ I believe that happiness will come to people when they are singing because singing is very relaxing and helps people to relieve stress after a long day of work.

The phrase 'learning work' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'a long day of work'. This is an incorrect preposition and phrase usage error.

× Moreover, I find things with friends very interesting and enjoy joyful.

✓ Moreover, I find spending time with friends very interesting and enjoyable.

The phrase 'enjoy joyful' is incorrect. 'Enjoy' is a verb and should be followed by a noun or gerund, and 'joyful' is an adjective. The correct form is 'enjoyable' as an adjective describing the experience. Also, 'things with friends' is vague; 'spending time with friends' is clearer.