Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법적 오류가 있습니다. 'I have no confidence for singing' 대신 'I am not confident about singing'과 같이 표현하는 것이 좋습니다. 또한, 문장이 명확하지 않고 중복된 표현이 있으니 간결하고 명확하게 답변하세요.

Exemplo: No, I don't like singing because I am not confident about my voice. I feel that my voice is not suitable for singing, so I usually avoid it.

Sugestão: 문장이 부자연스럽고 의미 전달이 명확하지 않습니다. 'I've never thought how to sing' 대신 'I've never learned how to sing'라고 표현하세요. 또한, 이유를 설명할 때는 연결어를 사용해 문장을 논리적으로 연결하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Exemplo: No, I have never learned how to sing because I think it is difficult and I have never really considered learning it.

Sugestão: 답변이 비교적 명확하지만, 문법과 표현이 다소 어색합니다. 'I sing for my mother' 대신 'I would sing for my mother'라고 하고, 'I want to sing it' 대신 'I want to sing to her'라고 표현하는 것이 자연스럽습니다.

Exemplo: If I had a chance to sing for someone, I would sing for my mother because it would be a way to express my gratitude and love for her.

Sugestão: 문법과 표현이 부자연스럽고 의미 전달이 명확하지 않습니다. 'I definitely think it' 대신 'I definitely think so'라고 하고, 'whenever I exhausted'는 'whenever I feel exhausted'로 수정하세요. 또한, 'stop our thinking'은 의미가 모호하니 구체적으로 표현하세요.

Exemplo: Yes, I definitely think singing can bring happiness. For example, whenever I feel exhausted, I listen to songs and watch live performances, which help me relax and feel better.

× I have no confidence for singing.

✓ I have no confidence in singing.

The correct preposition to use with 'confidence' is 'in', not 'for'. 'Confidence in' means trust or belief in one's ability to do something.

× I think my voice is not proper to sing and I've never thought.

✓ I think my voice is not suitable for singing and I've never thought about it.

'Proper' is not the best adjective here; 'suitable' fits better. Also, 'to sing' should be 'for singing' or 'about singing'. The phrase 'I've never thought' is incomplete and needs an object, so 'about it' is added.

× No, I've never thought how to sing.

✓ No, I've never thought about how to sing.

The verb 'think' when followed by a question word like 'how' usually requires the preposition 'about' to indicate the subject of thought.

× I always think to learn how to sing is hard for me and also I don't think about.

✓ I always think learning how to sing is hard for me and also I don't think about it.

The phrase 'think to learn' is incorrect; 'think learning' or 'think that learning' is correct. Also, 'I don't think about' is incomplete and needs an object like 'it'.

× If I have a chance to sing for someone, I sing for my mother.

✓ If I have a chance to sing for someone, I would sing for my mother.

The conditional sentence requires a modal verb 'would' to express a hypothetical situation.

× Also, I love her, so I want to sing it.

✓ Also, I love her, so I want to sing for her.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect here because 'sing' is an action directed towards a person, so 'for her' is appropriate.

× Yes I definitely think it.

✓ Yes, I definitely think so.

The phrase 'think it' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'think so' to agree with a previous statement.

× whenever I exhausted I always listen to song and watch live videos.

✓ whenever I am exhausted I always listen to songs and watch live videos.

The sentence is missing the verb 'am' after 'I'. 'Song' should be plural 'songs' because it refers to music in general.

× It can make me more healthy and stop our thinking.

✓ It can make me healthier and stop my overthinking.

'More healthy' is less natural than the comparative adjective 'healthier'. 'Stop our thinking' is vague; 'stop my overthinking' is clearer and more natural.