Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm sai. Ngoài ra, hãy thêm các chi tiết cụ thể hơn để làm câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it runs in my family. Everyone at home has a natural talent for singing, and I have inherited this passion from them.

Sugestão: Bạn nên sử dụng thì đúng và câu hoàn chỉnh. Hãy tránh dùng từ ngữ không chính xác và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Đồng thời, cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể để câu trả lời hấp dẫn hơn.

Exemplo: No, I have never taken formal singing lessons because I believe singing is my natural talent. However, when I was a child, my mother often took me to music competitions, which helped me gain experience.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lặp từ và sắp xếp ý hợp lý hơn.

Exemplo: I would like to sing for anyone who enjoys music because I want to share my passion and make people happy through my performances.

Sugestão: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và cung cấp các lý do cụ thể, rõ ràng hơn về lợi ích của việc hát.

Exemplo: Of course, singing can bring happiness to people because music helps us relax, entertain ourselves, and reduce stress. Singing also allows us to express emotions and feel more joyful.

× To be honest, I'm very interested in singing because my family have seen talent, tradition, so everybody in my house is very good at sing and I'm interested in it.

✓ To be honest, I'm very interested in singing because my family has talent and tradition, so everybody in my house is very good at singing and I'm interested in it.

The subject 'my family' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' instead of 'have'. Also, 'good at sing' is incorrect; the correct form is 'good at singing' because after 'good at' we use the gerund form of the verb.

× No, I have never learned how to sing 'cause singing is my talent.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing because singing is my talent.

The contraction ''cause' is informal and should be replaced with 'because' in formal speech or writing. The tense 'have never learned' is correct here, so no tense correction is needed.

× So when I was a kid, my mom usually bring me to some music competition and it's very good.

✓ So when I was a kid, my mom usually brought me to some music competitions and it was very good.

The verb 'bring' should be in the past tense 'brought' to match 'when I was a kid'. Also, 'music competition' should be plural 'music competitions' to indicate multiple events. 'It's very good' should be 'it was very good' to maintain past tense consistency.

× This was an interesting question for me I'm. I Can't Sing for everyone that want to hear me because I want to sending my voice to everyone that I'm very like to sing and perform my for.

✓ This was an interesting question for me. I can't sing for everyone who wants to hear me because I want to send my voice to everyone. I really like to sing and perform.

The original sentences have several structural errors: 'I'm' is misplaced; 'Can't Sing' should be 'can't sing'; 'everyone that want' should be 'everyone who wants' to correctly use relative pronouns and subject-verb agreement; 'want to sending' should be 'want to send' because 'to' is followed by the base verb; 'I'm very like' should be 'I really like'; 'perform my for' is unclear and corrected to 'perform'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Of course, music is very important with our life, they help us more relaxing, entertain and. Reduce up stress and even singing is help us to burn out our.

✓ Of course, music is very important in our lives; it helps us relax more, entertain us, reduce stress, and even singing helps us to burn out energy.

The preposition 'with' is incorrect; it should be 'in' when talking about importance in life. 'They' refers to music (singular), so it should be 'it'. 'Help us more relaxing' should be 'helps us relax more' because 'help' is followed by the base verb. 'Reduce up stress' is incorrect; 'reduce stress' is correct. 'Singing is help us' should be 'singing helps us'. 'Burn out our' is incomplete; 'burn out energy' or 'burn calories' is appropriate.