Singing— Part 1 Relatório
Conversa
Part 1
Examinador
Do you like singing? Why?
Candidato
Yes, I love singing because I have grown up in a household where everybody sings. My mother used to sing me to sleep and my father used to sing every time he made breakfast. We also have regular karaoke nights where all of us go out and we each take turns singing and it just creates such a happy atmosphere for me.
Examinador
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Candidato
Although I haven't learned how to sing professionally, I did watch YouTube videos that could help me sing better, could help me reach the high notes easily. But through that I realized I am more of a low range person. So then I started to sing songs according to my vocal range and that did help me.
Examinador
Who do you want to sing for?
Candidato
Although I don't want to sing for anybody particularly, I do sing for myself which helps me relax and get my head in the zone. I undergo a lot of stress and I put too much burden on myself, so I feel singing helps me relax and calm my nose. I often sing Taylor Swift songs to help me feel better.
Examinador
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Candidato
Yes, I strongly believe that singing can bring happiness to people because people often tend to relate lyrics to themselves and their life moments, and singing is something that can unite people together. For example, Lollapalooza gathers thousands of fans who enjoy the great atmosphere together.
Avaliação
Total
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
Pontuação: 85.0Sugestão: Your answer is natural and detailed, but it is slightly long and could be more concise. Try to limit your response to 4-5 sentences and avoid repeating similar ideas. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.
Exemplo: Yes, I love singing because I grew up in a family where everyone enjoys it. For instance, my mother used to sing me to sleep, and we often have karaoke nights that create a joyful atmosphere.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Pontuação: 80.0Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question well but could be improved by using clearer linking words and avoiding repetition. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary and structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details.
Exemplo: I haven't received professional singing lessons, but I watched YouTube tutorials to improve my skills. Through this, I discovered that my voice suits lower notes better, so I focus on songs within my vocal range, which has helped me improve.
Who do you want to sing for?
Pontuação: 75.0Sugestão: Your answer is personal and relevant, but there are some language errors (e.g., 'calm my nose' should be 'calm my mind'). Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid redundancy.
Exemplo: I usually sing for myself because it helps me relax and clear my mind. Since I often feel stressed, singing songs by artists like Taylor Swift helps me feel better and more focused.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Pontuação: 90.0Sugestão: Your answer is well-structured and relevant with a good example. To improve, try to use more varied vocabulary and linking phrases to enhance coherence.
Exemplo: Yes, I firmly believe singing brings happiness because people connect with the lyrics and their own experiences. Moreover, singing unites people, as seen at events like Lollapalooza, where thousands gather to enjoy the lively atmosphere together.
Gramática
× Although I haven't learned how to sing professionally, I did watch YouTube videos that could help me sing better, could help me reach the high notes easily.
✓ Although I haven't learned how to sing professionally, I have watched YouTube videos that could help me sing better, could help me reach the high notes easily.
The sentence mixes present perfect ('haven't learned') with simple past ('did watch'). To maintain consistency and correct tense usage, 'did watch' should be changed to present perfect 'have watched' because the action relates to the present context.
× I do sing for myself which helps me relax and get my head in the zone.
✓ I do sing for myself which helps me relax and get my head into the zone.
The correct preposition to use with 'get my head' in this context is 'into' rather than 'in' to indicate entering a mental state or focus.
× so I feel singing helps me relax and calm my nose.
✓ so I feel singing helps me relax and calm my mind.
The word 'nose' is incorrect here; the intended meaning is to calm the mind or thoughts. 'Mind' is the appropriate noun to express mental calmness.
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