Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但语法错误较多，表达不够自然，且句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，避免重复，注意主谓一致，并且用更自然的表达方式。

Exemplo: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and relieves stress from work and city life. However, I don't have enough time to sing often.

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，且观点表达不够清晰。建议使用更准确的表达方式，避免重复和错误的搭配，清楚表达自己的观点。

Exemplo: To be honest, I have never taken singing lessons because I think it would be a waste of money and time. Also, I don't believe it would improve my singing much.

Sugestão: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，且句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，注意代词使用和时态，表达时更连贯自然。

Exemplo: I would like to sing for my father because he has always supported me financially and worked hard. Unfortunately, he doesn't spend much time with me, which I find sad.

Sugestão: 回答表达了观点，但语法和句子结构有问题，且部分表达不完整。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，注意语法和词汇的准确使用。

Exemplo: Of course, singing can bring happiness to people. For one thing, it helps clear the mind and relax after a busy day. For another, it gives us more energy.

× I like singing because when I sing it can gives them more energy and it helps me feel relaxed.

✓ I like singing because when I sing it can give me more energy and it helps me feel relaxed.

动词give后面不需要加s，因为主语是can，情态动词后动词用原形。

× It helps me escape from the stress from the my work and city.

✓ It helps me escape from the stress of my work and city.

介词from后面不需要重复使用，且the后面不应有my，应该用of来表示所属关系。

× However, it's not there is not enough time for me to see.

✓ However, there is not enough time for me to see.

句子结构混乱，重复使用了否定词，应该简化为“there is not enough time”。

× To be honestly, I have never learned some skills about singing because I think it will waste my money and it will help cost a lot of my time.

✓ To be honest, I have never learned any skills about singing because I think it will waste my money and cost a lot of my time.

短语应为“To be honest”，且“help cost”用法错误，应去掉help。

× I don't think exercise singing can make me feel more better.

✓ I don't think practicing singing can make me feel better.

“more better”是错误的比较级用法，better本身就是比较级，不需要more。

× I would like to sing for my father for it has always give me money for me to survive and education.

✓ I would like to sing for my father because he has always given me money for me to survive and get an education.

主语he与动词has和given需要一致，且句子表达更清晰。

× However, my father spent her his lot of time for doing hard work.

✓ However, my father spends a lot of time doing hard work.

代词her错误，应为his；时态应为一般现在时；“spent”后不接“for”，应直接接动名词。

× However he don't spend a lot of time accompanying with me.

✓ However, he doesn't spend a lot of time accompanying me.

主语he与动词don't不一致，应为doesn't；动词accompany后不加介词with。

× Of course, singing can bring a lot of happiness to our to us

✓ Of course, singing can bring a lot of happiness to us.

介词短语重复，去掉“our to”。

× For one reason, singing can help our mind clearly and make us feel relaxed after the busy life of the schedule

✓ For one reason, singing can help clear our mind and make us feel relaxed after a busy schedule.

表达不清晰，改为“help clear our mind”更自然；“life of the schedule”不合适，改为“a busy schedule”。

× For another reason, singing can help us a lot of energy to.

✓ For another reason, singing can help us have a lot of energy.

“help us a lot of energy to”结构错误，应改为“help us have a lot of energy”。