Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy and improving sentence structure. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, instead of repeating 'I like to sing' twice, you can combine your ideas into one clear sentence.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy singing because it brings me peace and happiness. I often sing Bollywood and Hollywood songs, especially during family functions, which makes these occasions more enjoyable.

Sugestão: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and incomplete sentences. Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. Also, be more specific about the apps you use and how they help you.

Exemplo: I haven't learned to sing professionally, but I enjoy singing for relaxation. To improve, I use singing apps on my phone, such as a piano app and a vocal training app, which help me practice regularly.

Sugestão: Try to avoid hesitation and repetition. Structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. Be more specific about why you want to sing for your mother.

Exemplo: I want to sing for my mother because she has worked very hard throughout my life. Since I was a child, I have admired her dedication, so I would like to dedicate a special song to show my appreciation.

Sugestão: Improve your grammar and pronunciation, and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect your ideas clearly. Also, be more specific about how singing brings happiness to people.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe singing brings a lot of happiness to people. For example, when I sing disco or classic songs, it not only gives me inner peace but also spreads joy to those around me.

× I sing some Bollywood and Hollywood songs because it gives me a peace and it's a source of my enjoyment.

✓ I sing some Bollywood and Hollywood songs because it gives me peace and it's a source of my enjoyment.

The article 'a' before 'peace' is incorrect because 'peace' is an uncountable noun and does not require an article in this context.

× I often sing a song during my family function also.

✓ I often sing songs during my family functions also.

The noun 'song' should be plural 'songs' to match the habitual action, and 'family function' should be plural 'family functions' to indicate multiple occasions.

× Actually, I don't learn professionally how to sing.

✓ Actually, I haven't learned professionally how to sing.

The present perfect tense 'haven't learned' is appropriate here to indicate an action that has not occurred up to now, rather than the simple present 'don't learn'.

× I download, uh, some apps, some singing apps in my phone like a piano and a small app.

✓ I download, uh, some apps, some singing apps on my phone like a piano and a small app.

The correct preposition to indicate something installed or present on a device is 'on' rather than 'in'.

× I want to sing for my mother because she's very hard working and, uh, she's and uh, I see her hard work since I, I was a child, so she did a lot of hard work for me.

✓ I want to sing for my mother because she's very hardworking and, uh, I have seen her hard work since I was a child, so she has done a lot of hard work for me.

The phrase 'she's and uh' is incomplete and redundant; 'I see' should be in present perfect 'I have seen' to indicate an action continuing from past to present; 'she did' should be present perfect 'she has done' to express past actions relevant to the present.

× Yes of course it bring so much happiness to people because whenever I single disco songs or a static songs it gives inner peace to me and the people also it bring it bring a sense of joy.

✓ Yes, of course it brings so much happiness to people because whenever I sing disco songs or static songs it gives inner peace to me and to the people also; it brings a sense of joy.

The verb 'bring' should be 'brings' to agree with the singular subject 'it'; 'single' is incorrect and should be 'sing'; 'a static songs' is incorrect and should be 'static songs'; the sentence structure is improved for clarity.