Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够自然。建议使用正确的语法结构，如“I really love singing because it helps me relax and relieves my stress.”同时避免使用“relieve my pleasures”这种不合适的表达。

Exemplo: Yes, I really love singing because it helps me relax and relieves my stress after a long day.

Sugestão: 语法错误明显，如“haven't learn”应为“haven't learned”。句子结构不够清晰，建议简化表达并使用连词使句子更连贯。

Exemplo: No, I haven't learned how to sing formally, but I often watch online videos and take lessons to practice by myself.

Sugestão: 句子结构混乱，语法错误多。建议使用简单明了的句子表达，如“I like to sing for my friends because it makes me happy and strengthens our friendship.”

Exemplo: I like to sing for my friends because when we sing together, it makes me happy and helps us become closer.

Sugestão: 表达不连贯，语法错误多，重复用词。建议简化句子，使用连词连接观点，如“Yes, listening to someone sing beautifully can make people feel happier. Also, singing can help relieve stress.”

Exemplo: Yes, listening to someone sing beautifully can make people feel happier. Also, singing can help relieve stress when you feel pressured.

× Yes, I very love singing because I think singing is a good way to relax and can relieve my pleasures.

✓ Yes, I really love singing because I think singing is a good way to relax and can relieve my pleasures.

这里的错误是副词使用不当，'very'不能直接修饰动词'love'，应使用副词'really'。副词用法错误属于动词+ing形式问题的范畴。

× No, I haven't learn how to sing but I always do something exercise for myself such as I will see the video of how to sing and take lessons online.

✓ No, I haven't learned how to sing but I always do some exercises for myself such as watching videos on how to sing and taking lessons online.

这里的错误是动词时态错误，'learn'应使用过去分词'learned'与'haven't'构成现在完成时。

× No, I haven't learn how to sing but I always do something exercise for myself such as I will see the video of how to sing and take lessons online.

✓ No, I haven't learned how to sing but I always do some exercises for myself such as watching videos on how to sing and taking lessons online.

'see the video'应改为'watching videos'，因为观看视频是一个持续的动作，使用动名词形式更合适。

× No, I haven't learn how to sing but I always do something exercise for myself such as I will see the video of how to sing and take lessons online.

✓ No, I haven't learned how to sing but I always do some exercises for myself such as watching videos on how to sing and taking lessons online.

'something exercise'应改为'some exercises'，因为'exercise'在这里应为可数名词复数形式。

× My friends because when I singing, my friends will join me and together sing with me, so I will feel very enjoyable and reflect which can promote our friendship.

✓ My friends because when I am singing, my friends will join me and sing together with me, so I will feel very happy and relaxed which can promote our friendship.

'when I singing'缺少助动词，应为'when I am singing'，这是现在进行时的正确用法。

× My friends because when I singing, my friends will join me and together sing with me, so I will feel very enjoyable and reflect which can promote our friendship.

✓ My friends because when I am singing, my friends will join me and sing together with me, so I will feel very happy and relaxed which can promote our friendship.

'feel very enjoyable and reflect'用词错误，'enjoyable'是形容词，不能用来描述人的感受，应使用'happy and relaxed'。

× Yes, if you listen to a good voice someone sing and you will feel more happier and enjoy and when you are feel when you feel pressure and you can relax yourself by singing the songs.

✓ Yes, if you listen to someone singing with a good voice, you will feel happier and enjoy it, and when you feel pressure, you can relax yourself by singing songs.

'more happier'是比较级错误，'happier'已经是比较级，不能加'more'。此外，句子结构混乱，需调整使表达更清晰。