Part 1
Examinador
Do you like singing? Why?
Candidato
No, I don't have seeing because singing is really difficult for me and, uh, it is not, uh, soundful.
Examinador
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Candidato
No, because I am always studying so I don't have time to study how to sing.
Examinador
Who do you want to sing for?
Candidato
I want to sing for my mother because I love my mother very much and I want to sing a thankful song for my mother.
Examinador
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Candidato
Yes, singing is a happy things for people and listen to a song is also happy things.
Do you like singing? Why?
Pontuação: 40.0Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,建议使用正确的句式表达自己的观点,并避免重复和犹豫词汇。可以简洁明了地说明自己不喜欢唱歌的原因。
Exemplo: No, I don't like singing because I find it difficult and I don't think I sing well.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: 回答较为直接,但可以使用更自然的表达方式,并且避免重复“study”一词。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅。
Exemplo: No, I haven't learned how to sing because I am always busy with my studies, so I don't have time for singing lessons.
Who do you want to sing for?
Pontuação: 75.0Sugestão: 回答内容具体且表达了感情,但句子结构较为重复。建议使用连接词和同义词丰富表达,使语言更自然。
Exemplo: I would like to sing for my mother because I love her deeply and want to express my gratitude through a special song.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Pontuação: 50.0Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当,建议使用正确的单复数形式和更准确的词汇,同时可以用连接词使句子更连贯。
Exemplo: Yes, singing brings happiness to people, and listening to songs can also make people feel joyful.
× No, I don't have seeing because singing is really difficult for me and, uh, it is not, uh, soundful.
✓ No, I don't like singing because singing is really difficult for me and, uh, it is not, uh, pleasant.
动词后面不应该用动名词形式'seeing',这里应该用动词'like'来表达喜欢与否。'soundful'不是正确的形容词,应该用'pleasant'来表达愉快的感觉。
× No, because I am always studying so I don't have time to study how to sing.
✓ No, because I am always studying, so I don't have time to learn how to sing.
这里的'study how to sing'表达不准确,应该用'learn how to sing'表示学习唱歌的技能。
× Yes, singing is a happy things for people and listen to a song is also happy things.
✓ Yes, singing is a happy thing for people and listening to a song is also a happy thing.
'things'是复数形式,但前面有不定冠词'a',应使用单数形式'thing'。此外,'listen to a song'应改为动名词形式'listening to a song',作为主语使用。