SingingPart 1 Relatório

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Part 1

Examinador

Do you like singing? Why?

Candidato

No, I don't have seeing because singing is really difficult for me and, uh, it is not, uh, soundful.

Examinador

Have you ever learnt how to sing?

Candidato

No, because I am always studying so I don't have time to study how to sing.

Examinador

Who do you want to sing for?

Candidato

I want to sing for my mother because I love my mother very much and I want to sing a thankful song for my mother.

Examinador

Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?

Candidato

Yes, singing is a happy things for people and listen to a song is also happy things.

Avaliação

Total

Total: 5.0Fluência e coerência: 5.5Pronúncia: 5.0Gramática: 5.0Recurso lexical: 5.0

Part 1

Do you like singing? Why?

Pontuação: 40.0

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,建议使用正确的句式表达自己的观点,并避免重复和犹豫词汇。可以简洁明了地说明自己不喜欢唱歌的原因。

Exemplo: No, I don't like singing because I find it difficult and I don't think I sing well.

Have you ever learnt how to sing?

Pontuação: 70.0

Sugestão: 回答较为直接,但可以使用更自然的表达方式,并且避免重复“study”一词。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅。

Exemplo: No, I haven't learned how to sing because I am always busy with my studies, so I don't have time for singing lessons.

Who do you want to sing for?

Pontuação: 75.0

Sugestão: 回答内容具体且表达了感情,但句子结构较为重复。建议使用连接词和同义词丰富表达,使语言更自然。

Exemplo: I would like to sing for my mother because I love her deeply and want to express my gratitude through a special song.

Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?

Pontuação: 50.0

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当,建议使用正确的单复数形式和更准确的词汇,同时可以用连接词使句子更连贯。

Exemplo: Yes, singing brings happiness to people, and listening to songs can also make people feel joyful.

Gramática

Verb + -ing form

× No, I don't have seeing because singing is really difficult for me and, uh, it is not, uh, soundful.

No, I don't like singing because singing is really difficult for me and, uh, it is not, uh, pleasant.

动词后面不应该用动名词形式'seeing',这里应该用动词'like'来表达喜欢与否。'soundful'不是正确的形容词,应该用'pleasant'来表达愉快的感觉。

Present tense issue

× No, because I am always studying so I don't have time to study how to sing.

No, because I am always studying, so I don't have time to learn how to sing.

这里的'study how to sing'表达不准确,应该用'learn how to sing'表示学习唱歌的技能。

Singular and plural issue

× Yes, singing is a happy things for people and listen to a song is also happy things.

Yes, singing is a happy thing for people and listening to a song is also a happy thing.

'things'是复数形式,但前面有不定冠词'a',应使用单数形式'thing'。此外,'listen to a song'应改为动名词形式'listening to a song',作为主语使用。

Vocabulário

DifficultHard; Troublesome; Inconvenient
HappyCheerful; Glad; Fortunate
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