Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to use more natural expressions and avoid incorrect word choices. For example, instead of 'makes me become evaporated from my daily work', you can say 'helps me forget about my daily work'. Also, keep your answer concise and clear.

Exemplo: Yes, I really like singing because it helps me relieve stress and forget about my daily work.

Sugestão: Be careful with word choice and grammar. For example, 'Singh teacher' should be 'singing teacher', and 'in a appropriate way' should be 'in an appropriate way'. Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: When I was a little kid, my mother took me to a famous singing teacher's home, and she taught me how to sing in an appropriate way. After that, I even participated in a singing competition.

Sugestão: Improve sentence structure and vocabulary. For example, 'families' should be 'family members', and 'birthday celebration party' can be simplified to 'birthday parties'. Also, avoid redundancy and unclear phrases like 'sing to my for my boyfriend'.

Exemplo: I like to sing for everyone I love, such as my family members and friends. I often sing at their birthday parties, and sometimes I sing for my boyfriend because I think it's fun.

Sugestão: Correct vocabulary mistakes ('seeing' should be 'singing') and improve clarity. Avoid incomplete or confusing sentences like 'I can fully enjoy my singing because really?'. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Exemplo: Yes, singing can help people relax and feel happy. For example, I always sing when I take a shower because it makes me feel joyful and refreshed.

× I really like singing because I think singing can help me to release my stress and sometimes it makes me become evaporated from my daily work.

✓ I really like singing because I think singing can help me release my stress and sometimes it makes me feel evaporated from my daily work.

The verb 'help' is usually followed by the base form of the verb without 'to'. Also, 'become evaporated' is incorrect; 'feel evaporated' is more appropriate to express a state of feeling drained or exhausted.

× my mother took me to a famous Singh teacher's home and let her teach me how to sing in a appropriate way.

✓ my mother took me to a famous Singh teacher's home and let her teach me how to sing in an appropriate way.

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a word starting with a vowel sound like 'appropriate'.

× I will sing to everyone I love such as my families or friends.

✓ I will sing to everyone I love such as my family or friends.

'Family' is usually an uncountable noun or singular collective noun; 'families' refers to multiple family units, which is not intended here.

× I also sing to my for my boyfriend because I think it's a funny thing.

✓ I also sing to my boyfriend because I think it's a funny thing.

The phrase 'to my for my boyfriend' is incorrect and redundant; 'to my boyfriend' is sufficient.

× Yes, seeing can help people to release themselves, especially when we take a shower for example, I always sing when I am in the shower room.

✓ Yes, singing can help people to relax, especially when we take a shower. For example, I always sing when I am in the shower room.

The word 'seeing' is a typo and should be 'singing'. Also, 'release themselves' is awkward; 'relax' is more natural. The sentence is long and needs to be split for clarity.