SingingPart 1 Relatório

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Part 1

Examinador

Do you like singing? Why?

Candidato

Yes, I like singing because I think singing can bring us happiness and it's a good way to relieve our stress from our work and our family life.

Examinador

Have you ever learnt how to sing?

Candidato

No, I haven't learned how to sing because I think I'd love to sing casually and actually I'm not a good singer. I just enjoy the process of my singing.

Examinador

Who do you want to sing for?

Candidato

I want to sing for my best friend, he is a warm people and he always cares about me so I want to sing for him to strengthen our friendship.

Examinador

Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?

Candidato

Definitely. I think seeing can bring happiness and joy to people. For example, when we sing a cheerful song, both the singer and the listener can feel happy and lucky.

Avaliação

Total

Total: 6.0Fluência e coerência: 6.0Pronúncia: 6.0Gramática: 5.5Recurso lexical: 6.0

Part 1

Do you like singing? Why?

Pontuação: 80.0

Sugestão: 回答较为自然且内容相关,但句子较长且略显重复,建议简化表达并避免冗余,使回答更简洁流畅。

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy singing because it makes me happy and helps me relax after a busy day at work or with family.

Have you ever learnt how to sing?

Pontuação: 75.0

Sugestão: 回答表达了观点,但句子结构稍显混乱,建议使用更清晰的句子结构,并避免重复表达。

Exemplo: No, I haven't taken singing lessons because I prefer to sing casually for fun, even though I'm not very skilled.

Who do you want to sing for?

Pontuação: 70.0

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误(people应为person),且句子较长,建议注意语法准确性并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Exemplo: I want to sing for my best friend because he is kind and always supports me, so singing for him can strengthen our friendship.

Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?

Pontuação: 65.0

Sugestão: 回答中出现拼写错误(seeing应为 singing),且表达较为简单,建议注意拼写并丰富细节,使回答更具体有说服力。

Exemplo: Definitely. Singing can bring joy because cheerful songs lift the mood of both the singer and the audience, creating a positive atmosphere.

Gramática

Singular and plural issue

× he is a warm people and he always cares about me so I want to sing for him to strengthen our friendship.

he is a warm person and he always cares about me so I want to sing for him to strengthen our friendship.

people 是复数形式,表示“人们”,而这里指的是单个人,应该用单数形式 person。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I think seeing can bring happiness and joy to people.

I think singing can bring happiness and joy to people.

seeing 是“看见”的意思,语境中应为“唱歌”,正确单词是 singing。

Vocabulário

BestFinest; To the highest standard
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
HappyCheerful; Glad; Fortunate
LuckyFortunate; Providential
WarmBalmy; Heated; Thick; Friendly; Heat (up)
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