Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly answering the question, using correct grammar, and avoiding redundancy. Also, provide specific reasons with clear linking words.

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy singing because both of my parents were singers. Therefore, I have learned many singing techniques from them, which has helped me improve my skills.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about what you learned. Also, correct grammar mistakes and avoid vague phrases like 'signing knowledge'.

Exemplo: Yes, my parents taught me how to sing when I was young. They showed me various techniques and encouraged me to practice regularly, which helped me memorize many songs.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and grammatically correct. Avoid unnecessary questions like 'Why?' and use linking words to make your answer coherent. Also, express your feelings more clearly.

Exemplo: I want to sing for my parents because they have taught me so much over the years. Singing for them is my way of showing appreciation for their support and guidance.

Sugestão: Your answer has good ideas but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use correct sentence structures and linking words to make your points clear and natural. Also, avoid vague expressions like 'the bridge'.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness and energy to people. Music is a universal language that connects people from different cultures and backgrounds.

× my father and my mother was a singer before

✓ my father and my mother were singers before

The subject 'my father and my mother' is plural, so the verb should be 'were' instead of 'was'. Also, since both were singers, the plural noun 'singers' is appropriate.

× so I have many experience to God from them

✓ so I have much experience from them

'Experience' is an uncountable noun, so 'many' should be replaced with 'much'. Also, 'to God' is incorrect in this context and should be removed.

× I have learned a lot singing skills and also loud music

✓ I have learned a lot of singing skills and also about loud music

The phrase 'a lot singing skills' is missing the preposition 'of'. Also, 'loud music' should be preceded by 'about' to indicate the topic learned.

× my parents taught me before and taught me how to use singing skills to practice more

✓ my parents taught me before and showed me how to use singing skills to practice more

The verb 'taught' is correct in past tense, but repeating 'taught me' is redundant. Using 'showed me' clarifies the meaning and improves sentence flow.

× I had to memorize a lot of signing knowledge

✓ I had to memorize a lot of singing knowledge

The word 'signing' is incorrect here; it should be 'singing' to refer to the act of singing.

× I want to sing for my parents

✓ I want to sing to my parents

The correct preposition to indicate the recipient of singing is 'to', not 'for'.

× they taught me for a long time

✓ they taught me for a long time

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× I want to sing some songs to them to tell them I actually learn lots of knowledge from them and I can practice good

✓ I want to sing some songs to them to show that I have actually learned a lot from them and that I can practice well

The phrase 'to tell them I actually learn lots of knowledge' is awkward; 'to show that I have actually learned a lot' is clearer. Also, 'practice good' should be 'practice well' because 'well' is the adverb modifying 'practice'.

× singing is not only can bring happiness to people but also can give them energy

✓ singing can not only bring happiness to people but also give them energy

The phrase 'is not only can bring' is incorrect. The correct structure is 'can not only bring ... but also give ...' without the verb 'is'.

× music is one of the favorite and beautiful language all over the world

✓ music is one of the most favorite and beautiful languages all over the world

'Language' should be plural 'languages' because 'one of the' refers to a member of a group. Also, 'most favorite' is more appropriate than just 'favorite' when comparing.

× because it is can connect to people and the bridge

✓ because it can connect people and act as a bridge

The phrase 'connect to people' is incorrect; it should be 'connect people'. Also, 'and the bridge' is incomplete; it should be 'and act as a bridge' to make sense.