Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to use correct vocabulary and grammar, for example, use 'singing' instead of 'saying'. Also, organise your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, avoiding redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax. For instance, I often sing Cantonese songs, which relieve my academic stress effectively.

Sugestão: Focus on clear sentence structure and correct vocabulary. Avoid repetition and clarify your ideas with linking words. For example, explain why you prefer self-learning and why you don't like singing.

Exemplo: No, I have never taken singing lessons because they are quite expensive in Hong Kong, costing between 500 to 1000 dollars per lesson. Therefore, I prefer to learn by myself, although I am not very fond of singing.

Sugestão: Improve sentence clarity and grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples. For instance, explain how your friends support you and why you want to sing for them.

Exemplo: I want to sing for my friends because they have always supported me during difficult times. For example, when I struggled with a hard maths problem, they helped me overcome it.

Sugestão: Use more precise vocabulary and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to make your answer coherent. For example, explain how music transcends language barriers and conveys emotions.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because music is universal. Even if people don't understand the language, a happy song can still uplift their spirits.

× I like saying because when I was saying I feel very relaxed, I usually seen some Cantonese songs, including some bread, and this may feel very relaxed for my academic pressure.

✓ I like singing because when I am singing I feel very relaxed. I usually listen to some Cantonese songs, including some ballads, and this helps me feel very relaxed from my academic pressure.

The verb 'saying' is incorrectly used instead of 'singing' which is the correct present participle form for the activity. Also, 'seen' is the past participle and should be replaced with 'listen to' to correctly express the action. 'Bread' seems to be a mishearing or typo and is corrected to 'ballads' which fits the context. The sentence is also split for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I usually seen some Cantonese songs, including some bread, and this may feel very relaxed for my academic pressure.

✓ I usually listen to some Cantonese songs, including some ballads, and this helps me feel very relaxed from my academic pressure.

The verb 'seen' is incorrectly used in place of the simple present tense 'listen to' to describe a habitual action. 'Seen' is the past participle of 'see' and does not fit here. The sentence is corrected to present tense to match the habitual nature of the action.

× No of course, because nowadays in Hong Kong if if I want to learn how to sing it may cost one lesson. Need to pay around 500 to $1000 and it's very expensive.

✓ No, of course not, because nowadays in Hong Kong if I want to learn how to sing, one lesson may cost around $500 to $1000, and it's very expensive.

The modal verb 'may' is correctly used to express possibility, but the sentence structure is awkward and missing articles and punctuation. 'Need to pay' is a fragment and should be connected properly. The correction improves clarity and grammatical correctness while maintaining the modal verb usage.

× I would prefer self learning but I don't like saying.

✓ I would prefer self-learning but I don't like singing.

The phrase 'self learning' should be hyphenated as 'self-learning' to function as a compound noun. Also, 'saying' is incorrectly used instead of 'singing'. The preposition 'like' should be followed by the gerund form 'singing' to indicate the activity.

× I want to sing for my friend because when I was only my friend accompany with me to overcome the hardship and then my friend always support me during the obstacle that I can not overcome like having a hard mathematic problem and my friends always help me.

✓ I want to sing for my friend because when I was young, only my friend accompanied me to overcome hardships. My friend always supported me during obstacles that I could not overcome, like having a hard mathematics problem, and my friends always helped me.

The preposition 'with' after 'accompany' is incorrect; 'accompany' is a transitive verb and does not require 'with'. The verb tenses are inconsistent and corrected to past tense to match the context. 'Mathematic' is corrected to 'mathematics'. The sentence is also restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, of course I feel same can bring some happiness to people because song is a international thing and although some people don't understand the language inside the song, if the song is containing happiness, the soul will bring happiness to people.

✓ Yes, of course I feel singing can bring some happiness to people because a song is an international thing and although some people don't understand the language in the song, if the song contains happiness, the soul will bring happiness to people.

The pronoun 'same' is incorrectly used and should be replaced with 'singing' to refer to the activity. The article 'a' before 'international' should be 'an' because 'international' starts with a vowel sound. 'Containing' is incorrectly used and should be 'contains' to match the present tense. 'Inside the song' is better expressed as 'in the song' for natural preposition use.