Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to use clearer and more natural expressions. Avoid redundancy by not repeating the same idea. Also, correct grammar mistakes and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy singing because it improves my mood and boosts my confidence. Even though I'm not a professional singer, singing makes me feel happy and positive throughout the day.

Sugestão: Provide a complete and clear answer with proper sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid incomplete sentences.

Exemplo: I have never received formal singing lessons, but from elementary school through university, I often participated in activities that involved singing and dancing, which helped me practice informally.

Sugestão: Make your answer more coherent and complete. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid unclear or incomplete sentences.

Exemplo: If I had a beautiful voice, I would love to sing for my family to show my appreciation and love. Although I don't have a singing group, I would also enjoy sharing songs with my friends when I see them.

Sugestão: Use clearer vocabulary and complete your sentences. Explain your ideas with specific reasons and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Exemplo: Absolutely, I believe singing brings happiness because beautiful sounds can delight us and help us feel calm and comfortable. Moreover, singing is a great way to express emotions and create a pleasant atmosphere.

× It's just make my moods work well and upgrade my confidence.

✓ It just makes my mood work well and upgrades my confidence.

The verb 'make' should be in the third person singular present tense 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'It'. Also, 'moods' should be singular 'mood' to match the context, and 'upgrade' should be 'upgrades' to agree with the singular subject.

× It also make my day to become feel great about myself even though I don't have a great voice.

✓ It also makes my day feel great about myself even though I don't have a great voice.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'It'. The phrase 'to become feel' is incorrect; 'feel' alone is sufficient and correct here.

× Singing is really being.

✓ Singing is really enjoyable.

The phrase 'Singing is really being' is incomplete and unclear. Replacing 'being' with 'enjoyable' makes the sentence meaningful and grammatically correct.

× Actually, we don't have a formal education about learning how to sing, but when I was in elementary high school until I graduated my tertiary, we always had some activity which we are required to sing and dance and it's just.

✓ Actually, we didn't have formal education about learning how to sing, but from elementary school until I graduated from tertiary education, we always had activities where we were required to sing and dance.

The sentence has tense inconsistency and awkward phrasing. 'Don't have' should be past tense 'didn't have' to match the past context. 'Elementary high school' is incorrect; 'elementary school' is appropriate. 'Graduated my tertiary' should be 'graduated from tertiary education'. The phrase 'some activity which we are required to sing and dance and it's just' is incomplete and unclear; rephrasing improves clarity and grammar.

× Some of my friends I didn't see, but me, I don't have a group.

✓ I haven't seen some of my friends, and I don't have a group.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and has awkward structure. 'Some of my friends I didn't see' should be 'I haven't seen some of my friends' for clarity and correct tense. 'But me, I don't have a group' is better expressed as 'and I don't have a group'.

× This is when you heard a beautiful sounds.

✓ This is when you hear beautiful sounds.

The phrase 'you heard' is past tense, but the sentence context suggests a general statement, so present tense 'you hear' is appropriate. Also, 'a beautiful sounds' is incorrect; 'sounds' is plural and should not have the article 'a'.

× This is when you heard a beautiful sounds.

✓ This is when you hear beautiful sounds.

The noun 'sounds' is plural and should not be preceded by the singular article 'a'. Removing 'a' corrects the plural noun usage.

× It makes us feel delighted and it keeps us calm and comfortable and it's just a great expression of solves and also it creates a beautiful ambiance of.

✓ It makes us feel delighted and keeps us calm and comfortable. It's just a great expression of souls and also creates a beautiful ambiance.

The phrase 'expression of solves' is incorrect; likely intended 'expression of souls'. The sentence is also run-on and incomplete; splitting into two sentences improves clarity. The phrase 'creates a beautiful ambiance of' is incomplete; removing 'of' corrects the sentence.