Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answer wa natural ni shite, fukuzatsu na kotoba ya fukuzatsu na bunpou o tsukawazu, shizen de wakariyasui eigo de kotaeru koto ga taisetsu desu. Mata, kotae wa 5 bunshou ijou ni naranai you ni shite, jisho teki na youso o kuwaete, rikai o fukameru koto ga hitsuyou desu. Tatoeba, riyuu o meikaku ni shite, jissai no taiken ya kanjou o kuwashiku setsumei shite kudasai.

Exemplo: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and improves my mood. For example, when I sing English songs, I feel happy and refreshed. Singing also reduces my stress and makes me feel more energetic. Therefore, I enjoy singing regularly.

Sugestão: Kotae wa motto seikaku ni shite, bunpou to eigo no tsukaikata o tadashiku shiyou. Mata, kotae wa 5 bunshou ijou ni naranai you ni shite, rikai o fukameru tame ni, renshuu shita koto ya mananda koto o kuwashiku setsumei shite kudasai. Rensetsu-go o tsukatte, kotae no nagare o yoku shiyou.

Exemplo: Yes, I have learned how to sing. I took some singing lessons and practiced regularly. I also play the guitar, which helps me accompany my singing. Learning to sing has been enjoyable and it makes me feel relaxed and happy.

Sugestão: Kotae wa motto chokusetsu ni shite, shitsumon ni kotaeru you ni shiyou. Mata, 5 bunshou ijou ni naranai you ni shite, rikai o fukameru tame ni, dare ni utaitai no ka to sono riyuu o meikaku ni setsumei shite kudasai. Rensetsu-go o tsukatte, kotae o rikai shi yasuku shiyou.

Exemplo: I want to sing for my teacher, Altaf Ali, who supports me a lot. He is a famous and talented singer in my country. Singing for him motivates me to improve my skills and enjoy music more.

Sugestão: Kotae wa motto shizen de wakariyasui eigo de kotae, 5 bunshou ijou ni naranai you ni shiyou. Mata, rikai o fukameru tame ni, uta ga hito ni dono you ni kouka ga aru ka o meikaku ni setsumei shite kudasai. Rensetsu-go o tsukatte, kotae no nagare o yoku shiyou.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness to people. When we sing, it helps us relax and improves our mood. Singing can reduce stress and make us feel more positive. Therefore, it is an important activity for mental health.

× Yes, definitely I like singing because it's very essential for our mind replacement and our physical health.

✓ Yes, definitely I like singing because it's very important for our mental refreshment and our physical health.

The adjective 'essential' is correct but 'mind replacement' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is likely 'mental refreshment' or 'mental health improvement'. Use appropriate adjectives and nouns to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× When I sing some song such as English, song is very enjoyable for me.

✓ When I sing some songs, such as English songs, it is very enjoyable for me.

The noun 'song' should be plural 'songs' when referring to more than one. Also, 'such as English' is incomplete; it should be 'such as English songs'. Subject-verb agreement requires 'it is' instead of 'song is'.

× I feel refreshed and shine when I sing some song.

✓ I feel refreshed and shine when I sing a song.

The phrase 'some song' is incorrect; it should be 'a song' when referring to a single song. Also, 'shine' is a verb and should be used properly; here it is acceptable as a verb but better phrasing might be 'I feel refreshed and radiant'.

× So I always prefer song and sing.

✓ So I always prefer singing songs.

The phrase 'prefer song and sing' is awkward and incorrect. The verb 'prefer' should be followed by a gerund or noun phrase. 'Singing songs' is the correct form.

× Well, to be honest, I have a good idea about this topic and I know how can I sing a fresh song and I can easily use my guitar and my ano another instrument for sing a song.

✓ Well, to be honest, I have a good idea about this topic and I know how I can sing a fresh song and easily use my guitar and another instrument to sing a song.

The word order in 'how can I sing' is incorrect in a statement; it should be 'how I can sing'. Also, 'ano another' is a typo and should be 'another'. The phrase 'for sing a song' should be 'to sing a song'.

× So sing a song is very essential and enjoyable for me.

✓ So singing a song is very essential and enjoyable for me.

The phrase 'sing a song' is a verb phrase and cannot be the subject. Using the gerund 'singing a song' makes it a noun phrase suitable as the subject.

× When I use it and I do it, I feel refreshed.

✓ When I use it and do it, I feel refreshed.

The repetition of 'I' is unnecessary and awkward. Omitting the second 'I' improves sentence flow.

× To be honest I always like sing song.

✓ To be honest, I always like singing songs.

The verb 'like' should be followed by a gerund 'singing' not the base form 'sing'. Also, 'sing song' is incorrect; it should be 'singing songs'.

× So I have a teacher he always support to me when I sing some song and his name is Altaf Ali.

✓ So I have a teacher who always supports me when I sing some songs, and his name is Altaf Ali.

The relative pronoun 'who' is needed to connect clauses. 'Support to me' is incorrect; it should be 'supports me'. Also, 'some song' should be plural 'some songs'.

× He is very good personality person and he is the one of the major good quality singer in our country.

✓ He is a very good person and is one of the major high-quality singers in our country.

The phrase 'good personality person' is redundant and awkward; 'good person' suffices. 'Major good quality singer' is incorrect; 'major high-quality singer' is better. Also, 'the one of' should be 'one of'.

× So he always support me for when I sing a song and he know about every instrument about song So that's it.

✓ So he always supports me when I sing a song, and he knows about every instrument related to songs. So that's it.

'Support me for when' is incorrect; it should be 'supports me when'. 'He know' should be 'he knows'. 'About every instrument about song' is awkward; 'about every instrument related to songs' is better.

× Definitely, singing is very essential part in our life.

✓ Definitely, singing is a very essential part of our life.

The article 'a' is missing before 'very essential part'. Also, 'part in our life' should be 'part of our life'.

× When we sing a song, we feel very refreshed and shinable because it's very excellent work for our regular routine.

✓ When we sing a song, we feel very refreshed and radiant because it's excellent for our regular routine.

'Shinable' is not a correct word; 'radiant' or 'shining' is better. 'Very excellent work for our regular routine' is awkward; 'excellent for our regular routine' is clearer.

× And when we sing a song, we feel a relaxable life and our mental health call that.

✓ And when we sing a song, we feel relaxed in life, and our mental health benefits from that.

'Relaxable life' is incorrect; 'feel relaxed in life' is better. 'Our mental health call that' is incorrect; 'our mental health benefits from that' is correct.

× It's very good for our mental health, so it's very essential for us.

✓ It's very good for our mental health, so it's very essential for us.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.