Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Tapai ko uttar ma thap spashta ra prabhavit shabda prayog garnu parcha. Tapai le 'therapeutic' bhaneko ramro ho tara 'where we can find a piece in every song' bhanda 'peace' bhannu parcha. Arko kura, uttar lai 3-4 vaakya samma simit rakhnu parcha ra pratyek vaakya spashta hunu parcha.

Exemplo: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax when I feel stressed. Singing is therapeutic and brings me peace. Therefore, I enjoy singing whenever I have free time.

Sugestão: Tapai ko uttar ma thap sangathit ra spashta vaakya haru prayog garnu parcha. 'Randomly' ko sato 'for fun' ya 'casually' bhanera bhannu ramro huncha. Arko kura, linking words jastai 'although' ya 'but' prayog garera uttar lai ramro banau.

Exemplo: Although I have not formally learned how to sing, I often sing casually at home when I am alone. I enjoy singing because it helps me heal my pain and concentrate on my tasks.

Sugestão: Tapai ko uttar ma thap spashta ra prabhavit shabda prayog garnu parcha. 'That's why singing' jasto vaakya anavashyak ra asamarthak cha. Tapai le pratyek vaakya lai spashta ra sangaathit banau. Linking words jastai 'because' ya 'so' prayog garnu ramro huncha.

Exemplo: I do not sing for a specific person because singing helps me find inner peace and feel spiritual. Therefore, I sing mainly for myself rather than for others.

Sugestão: Tapai ko uttar ma thap sangathit ra spashta vaakya haru prayog garnu parcha. 'Hide their emotions' bhanne kura thik cha tara 'hide' ko sato 'express' ya 'release' bhanera bhannu ramro huncha. Linking words jastai 'because' ra 'for example' prayog garera uttar lai ramro banau.

Exemplo: Of course, I believe singing can bring happiness to many people because it helps them express their emotions and relieve stress. For example, when people feel bored or tired, singing can uplift their mood and make them feel better.

× Yes, I like singing because when I feel stressed then I prefer to sing a song because singing is a therapeutic where we can find a piece in every song.

✓ Yes, I like singing because when I feel stressed, I prefer to sing a song since singing is therapeutic and we can find peace in every song.

The word 'therapeutic' is an adjective and should not be preceded by 'a'. Also, 'a therapeutic' is incorrect; it should be 'therapeutic' without an article. Additionally, 'a piece' is a typo and should be 'peace'. The sentence structure is improved by removing unnecessary words and correcting word choice.

× Till date I haven't learned how to sing but at home when I stay alone then I prefer to sing a song randomly and I love to sing a song to heal my pain as well as to focus on the things that I'm doing.

✓ Till date, I haven't learned how to sing, but at home, when I am alone, I prefer to sing a song randomly, and I love to sing to heal my pain as well as to focus on the things that I am doing.

The phrase 'when I stay alone' is better expressed as 'when I am alone' to indicate a state. Also, 'love to sing a song' can be simplified to 'love to sing'. The present continuous tense 'I am doing' fits better than 'I'm doing' in formal speech. Commas are added for clarity.

× Actually, I do not sing to the specific person, but in order to feel peace inside me and in order to feel spiritual, I would love to sing a song.

✓ Actually, I do not sing for a specific person, but in order to feel peace inside me and to feel spiritual, I would love to sing a song.

The preposition 'to' is incorrect when referring to singing for someone; the correct preposition is 'for'. Also, 'in order to feel spiritual' is better expressed as 'to feel spiritual' for conciseness.

× That's why singing. For me, singing is not to sing for.

✓ That's why I sing. For me, singing is not about singing for someone.

The original sentences are incomplete and unclear. 'That's why singing' lacks a verb and subject. It should be 'That's why I sing.' The phrase 'singing is not to sing for' is awkward and unclear; it is corrected to 'singing is not about singing for someone' to clarify the meaning.

× Of course, in my opinion, singing can bring happiness to most of the people because I see a lot of people that they sing a song when they feel bored or tired and when they sing a song, they can hide their emotions, they can hide their pain as well.

✓ Of course, in my opinion, singing can bring happiness to most people because I see many people sing songs when they feel bored or tired, and when they sing, they can hide their emotions and their pain as well.

The phrase 'most of the people' is better as 'most people'. 'A lot of people that they sing a song' is redundant; 'many people sing songs' is clearer. Also, 'sing a song' is better as 'sing songs' to indicate general action. The sentence is streamlined for clarity and grammatical correctness.