Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer shows enthusiasm but contains grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to use correct verb tenses and avoid repeating words. Also, keep your answer concise and natural by focusing on one main reason and supporting it briefly.

Exemplo: Yes, I love singing because I have always dreamed of becoming a famous singer since I was a child. However, I realise that I lack the natural talent to pursue it professionally.

Sugestão: Your answer needs clearer structure and correct tense usage. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid awkward phrasing. Also, try to be more specific about what you learned and when.

Exemplo: Yes, I learnt singing formally from grade 6 to 9 under my teacher's guidance. However, I no longer take lessons and now I sing just for enjoyment.

Sugestão: Your answer is personal and relevant but contains repetition and some grammatical mistakes. Try to avoid repeating words and use correct sentence structures. Also, add linking words to make your answer more coherent.

Exemplo: I want to sing for my loved ones, especially my mother. She enjoys singing a lot and often invites me to join her for karaoke sessions.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and relevant but could be improved by using more varied vocabulary and smoother linking words. Also, try to avoid repeating similar phrases and make your example more vivid.

Exemplo: Definitely, I believe singing helps people bond and feel happier. For instance, when my friends visit, we often enjoy karaoke sessions together to unwind and strengthen our friendship.

× Of course I I adore singing. That is because when I were a child I have always dreamed of becoming a famous singer.

✓ Of course I adore singing. That is because when I was a child I had always dreamed of becoming a famous singer.

The verb 'were' is incorrect for the singular subject 'I' in past tense; it should be 'was' (Past tense issue). Also, 'have always dreamed' is present perfect, but the context refers to a past time, so past perfect 'had always dreamed' is appropriate to indicate an action completed before another past action.

× But now, in fact, I couldn't because I didn't have the innate capability to do that.

✓ But now, in fact, I can't because I don't have the innate capability to do that.

The sentence refers to the present inability, so present tense modal 'can't' and present tense 'don't have' should be used instead of past tense 'couldn't' and 'didn't have' (Past tense issue).

× Actually when I worked in grade 6 to 9 I have strictly learned how to sing instructed by my teacher, but now I didn't.

✓ Actually, when I worked in grades 6 to 9, I strictly learned how to sing under the instruction of my teacher, but now I don't.

The phrase 'have strictly learned' is present perfect but the time frame is definite past, so simple past 'learned' is correct (Past tense issue). Also, 'now I didn't' is incorrect for present time; it should be 'now I don't'.

× Actually when I worked in grade 6 to 9 I have strictly learned how to sing instructed by my teacher, but now I didn't.

✓ Actually, when I worked in grades 6 to 9, I strictly learned how to sing under the instruction of my teacher, but now I don't.

The phrase 'instructed by my teacher' is awkward; 'under the instruction of my teacher' is a better prepositional phrase to express the meaning (Incorrect use of prepositions).

× I have to confess that I want to sing for the ones I love. For example my my mother.

✓ I have to confess that I want to sing for the ones I love. For example, my mother.

The repetition 'my my' is a typographical error and should be corrected to a single 'my' (Incorrect use of pronouns).

× She is a big fan of singing and she's usually required me to to to do karaoke with her.

✓ She is a big fan of singing and she usually requires me to do karaoke with her.

The phrase 'she's usually required me' is incorrect; the correct form is 'she usually requires me' (Incorrect use of pronouns). Also, the repeated 'to to to' is a typographical error and should be 'to'.

× She is a big fan of singing and she's usually required me to to to do karaoke with her.

✓ She is a big fan of singing, and she usually requires me to do karaoke with her.

A comma before 'and' is needed to separate two independent clauses properly (Incorrect conjunction use).

× Obviously, I believe singing can enable people to be close to each other.

✓ Obviously, I believe singing can enable people to become close to each other.

The verb 'be' is less appropriate here; 'become' better expresses the process of developing closeness (Incorrect use of prepositions).

× For example, whenever my friends come to my house, if we have nothing to do, we usually have karaoke sessions to relax with each other.

✓ For example, whenever my friends come to my house, if we have nothing to do, we usually have karaoke sessions to relax together.

The phrase 'relax with each other' is awkward; 'relax together' is more natural and idiomatic (Incorrect use of prepositions).