Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer needs to be clearer and more structured. Start with a direct response, then explain with specific reasons. Avoid repetition and grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I love singing because it helps me feel better when I am lonely. For example, when I am alone at home, I often sing songs quietly or loudly to cheer myself up.

Sugestão: Try to give a clear and direct answer first, then add details. Use correct grammar and linking words to make your answer coherent. Avoid vague phrases and improve sentence structure.

Exemplo: I have not taken formal singing lessons, but I have learned by watching singers on TV and YouTube. I imitate their style and practice singing on my own.

Sugestão: Your answer should be more organized and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add supporting details using linking words. Avoid confusing phrases and be specific.

Exemplo: I want to sing for my wife. I have been practicing a song many times, and I hope to sing it perfectly for her one day.

Sugestão: Make sure to start with a clear opinion and support it with reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid repetition. Improve grammar and sentence clarity.

Exemplo: In my opinion, singing can bring happiness to people because when we sing songs, we forget our stress and feel more relaxed.

× Yes, I love singing because when I got aboard sometime and when I feel lonely I usually sing a sing a song in my mind and sometimes I loudly when I am alone with in home I love.

✓ Yes, I love singing because sometimes when I am abroad and when I feel lonely, I usually sing a song in my mind and sometimes I sing loudly when I am alone at home.

The sentence has incorrect past tense usage with 'got aboard' which should be 'am abroad' to indicate current or habitual state. Also, 'with in home' is incorrect preposition usage, corrected to 'at home'. The sentence structure is also improved for clarity.

× Yes, I love singing because when I got aboard sometime and when I feel lonely I usually sing a sing a song in my mind and sometimes I loudly when I am alone with in home I love.

✓ Yes, I love singing because sometimes when I am abroad and when I feel lonely, I usually sing a song in my mind and sometimes I sing loudly when I am alone at home.

The phrase 'with in home' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'at home' to indicate location. Also, 'got aboard' should be 'am abroad' to correctly express being in a foreign country.

× I don't remember I ever learn things but when I watch on TV to singer how to sing they and on YouTube and I copy them and then I start singing.

✓ I don't remember ever learning things, but when I watch singers on TV and on YouTube showing how to sing, I copy them and then I start singing.

The verb 'learn' should be in the gerund form 'learning' after 'remember ever'. Also, 'watch on TV to singer' is incorrect; it should be 'watch singers on TV'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct tense usage.

× I don't remember I ever learn things but when I watch on TV to singer how to sing they and on YouTube and I copy them and then I start singing.

✓ I don't remember ever learning things, but when I watch singers on TV and on YouTube showing how to sing, I copy them and then I start singing.

The phrase 'watch on TV to singer' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'watch singers on TV'. Prepositions must be used correctly to convey the intended meaning.

× Yes I do want sing for my wife and I. I think I thought I was about 1 songs and I practice many times that songs and one day definitely I sing in front of my wife. The song is perfect.

✓ Yes, I do want to sing for my wife and me. I think I have about one song, and I practice that song many times. One day, I will definitely sing in front of my wife. The song is perfect.

The sentence has multiple issues: missing 'to' after 'want' for the infinitive verb, incorrect pronoun 'I' instead of 'me' after a preposition, incorrect tense 'was' instead of 'have', and plural 'songs' changed to singular 'song' to match 'one'. Also, sentence structure is improved for clarity and correct tense usage.

× Yes I do want sing for my wife and I.

✓ Yes, I do want to sing for my wife and me.

After a preposition like 'for', the object pronoun 'me' should be used instead of the subject pronoun 'I'. Also, 'want sing' needs 'to' before the verb 'sing'.

× Yes I do want sing for my wife and I. I think I thought I was about 1 songs and I practice many times that songs and one day definitely I sing in front of my wife.

✓ Yes, I do want to sing for my wife and me. I think I have about one song, and I practice that song many times. One day, I will definitely sing in front of my wife.

The sentence needs future tense 'will sing' to express a definite future action. Also, 'I thought I was about 1 songs' is incorrect tense and number; corrected to 'I have about one song'.

× I think I thought I was about 1 songs and I practice many times that songs and one day definitely I sing in front of my wife.

✓ I think I have about one song, and I practice that song many times. One day, I will definitely sing in front of my wife.

The phrase 'I thought I was about 1 songs' mixes past and present incorrectly; 'I think I have about one song' is correct present tense. Also, 'practice many times that songs' is corrected to 'practice that song many times' for singular agreement.

× In my opinion, bring happiness to people because when we when we think about the songs and we singing a song, we forget about it stress and that's why I think.

✓ In my opinion, singing brings happiness to people because when we think about songs and sing a song, we forget about stress, and that's why I think so.

The verb 'bring' should be in third person singular present tense 'brings' to agree with the singular subject 'singing'. Also, 'we singing a song' is incorrect; it should be 'we sing a song'. The phrase 'forget about it stress' is corrected to 'forget about stress'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× In my opinion, bring happiness to people because when we when we think about the songs and we singing a song, we forget about it stress and that's why I think.

✓ In my opinion, singing brings happiness to people because when we think about songs and sing a song, we forget about stress, and that's why I think so.

The verb 'bring' must be in third person singular form 'brings' to agree with the singular subject 'singing'. Also, 'we singing' is incorrect; it should be 'we sing'.