Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 你的回答表达了不喜欢唱歌的原因，但语言表达不够自然，有语法错误和用词不当，如“walk to singing in the public”不符合英语习惯。建议多练习用简单且正确的句子表达自己的想法，避免语法错误。

Exemplo: Actually, I don't like singing because I often sing off-key. Also, I feel shy to sing in front of others, so I usually avoid singing in public because it makes me feel embarrassed.

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“seeing”应为“singing”，句子结构混乱。建议注意时态和连词的使用，表达要清晰连贯。

Exemplo: Yes, I tried to learn how to sing a few years ago, but I found it quite difficult because I think singing is a natural talent. Although I practiced every day, I didn't improve much, so I gave up.

Sugestão: 回答内容较好，但有语法错误，如“when I was children”应为“when I was a child”，动词时态不一致。建议注意单复数和时态的正确使用，使表达更准确。

Exemplo: I want to sing for my mother because when I was a child, she sang for me every day. Now, I want to sing for her, but I need some time to practice.

Sugestão: 回答中有多处语法和表达错误，如“seeing”应为“singing”，“let me happy and move it”表达不清。建议多积累相关词汇和句型，练习用简单句表达观点，避免语法错误。

Exemplo: Yes, I think singing has a great power to encourage people. When I watch dramas, I like to sing along. Some songs can make me feel happy and touched. Therefore, singing is very important.

× I usually walk to singing in the public.

✓ I usually sing in public.

动词后面不应该接动名词形式，且短语表达不正确。这里应使用动词原形'sing'，并且'walk to singing'表达不合适，改为'sing in public'更自然。

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

'learnt'是英式英语，'learned'是美式英语，两者均可，但需保持一致。此处建议使用美式英语'learned'。

× Although I practice every day but it can improve so I give up.

✓ Although I practiced every day, it did not improve, so I gave up.

句子结构错误，'although'和'but'不能同时使用，且时态不一致。应使用过去时态，且去掉'but'，使句子通顺。

× when I was children my mother sing for me every day.

✓ When I was a child, my mother sang for me every day.

'children'是复数，前面用的是单数时间状语，需改为单数'a child'。动词时态也需改为过去式'sang'。

× my mother sing for me every day.

✓ my mother sings for me every day.

主语是第三人称单数，动词应加's'，即'sings'。

× as in seeing have huge power to encourage people to do something

✓ as singing has huge power to encourage people to do something

'seeing'应为'singing'，且主语和谓语不匹配，需改为'singing has'。

× the one I watch the drama I sing.

✓ When I watch a drama, I sing.

句子结构混乱，'the one'用法错误，且缺少连词。改为完整句子表达。

× Some music can let me happy and move it.

✓ Some music can make me happy and moved.

'let me happy'用法错误，应为'make me happy'。'move it'表达不清，改为'moved'形容感受。