Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答时语法和表达不够自然，句子结构较为混乱，且有重复表达。建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，并注意时态和单复数的正确使用。

Exemplo: Yes, I really like singing because I have been learning it since primary school. It helps me relax and forget the stress from my studies and work.

Sugestão: 回答中存在词汇错误（如'seeing'应为'singing'），句子表达不清晰，逻辑不够连贯。建议注意词汇准确性，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Exemplo: Yes, I have learnt singing since I was in primary school. My music teacher, who specialized in piano, also taught me some basic piano skills.

Sugestão: 回答表达不清楚，语法错误较多，且信息混乱。建议简化表达，直接回答问题，并用简单句子说明原因。

Exemplo: I want to sing for my mom because she has never heard me sing personally.

Sugestão: 回答中存在词汇错误（如'seeing'应为'singing'），句子结构不够自然。建议使用正确词汇，简洁表达观点，并用连接词增强逻辑性。

Exemplo: Yes, of course. Singing happy and cheerful songs can express our feelings and influence others' moods positively.

× I do really like singing because I learned since I was at my primary school and at that time.

✓ I really like singing because I have liked it since I was in primary school.

句中使用了过去时learned，但表达从过去持续到现在的动作应使用现在完成时have liked。'since I was at my primary school'中介词用错，应为'in primary school'。

× I do really like singing because I learned since I was at my primary school and at that time.

✓ I really like singing because I have liked it since I was in primary school.

介词'at my primary school'不正确，表示在学校应使用'in primary school'。

× I love it really much because I think singing can help me to relax myself and to forgot every troublesome and the stress of my study and works.

✓ I love it very much because I think singing can help me relax and forget all the troubles and the stress of my studies and work.

'really much'用法不当，应为'very much'。'forgot'应为动词原形'forget'，因为前面有to。'every troublesome'搭配错误，应为'all the troubles'。'study and works'应为复数形式'studies and work'。

× I do really like singing because I learned since I was at my primary school and at that time.

✓ I really like singing because I have liked it since I was in primary school.

表达从过去持续到现在的动作应使用现在完成时，而非简单过去时。

× Yes, as I mentioned before I learned seeing things.

✓ Yes, as I mentioned before, I learned singing.

'seeing things'是拼写错误，应为'singing'。

× Yes, as I mentioned before I learned seeing things.

✓ Yes, as I mentioned before, I learned singing.

单词拼写错误，'seeing'应为'singing'。

× I was told by a music teacher who major is piano, so I learned some basic information about piano as well.

✓ I was taught by a music teacher whose major was piano, so I learned some basic information about piano as well.

'was told by'通常用于传达信息，教学应使用'was taught by'。'who major is piano'语法错误，应为'whose major was piano'。

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Who do you want to sing for?

此句无语法错误，符合口语习惯。

× It's a nice question. I would say my mom 'cause she didn't hear my son in officially and I never sing to her personally, so I would like to sing for her.

✓ That's a nice question. I would say my mom because she hasn't officially heard my song and I have never sung to her personally, so I would like to sing for her.

'didn't hear my son in officially'拼写和表达错误，应为'hasn't officially heard my song'。'never sing'时态错误，应为'never sung'。

× It's a nice question. I would say my mom 'cause she didn't hear my son in officially and I never sing to her personally, so I would like to sing for her.

✓ That's a nice question. I would say my mom because she hasn't officially heard my song and I have never sung to her personally, so I would like to sing for her.

描述过去经历时应使用现在完成时，'didn't hear'改为'hasn't heard'，'never sing'改为'have never sung'。

× Yes of course, especially when we are singing some songs that happily and cheering.

✓ Yes, of course, especially when we are singing some happy and cheerful songs.

'songs that happily and cheering'中'adverbs'用错，应使用形容词'happy'和'cheerful'来修饰'songs'。

× You know seeing can express feelings and emotions to others to influence others mood of the day.

✓ You know singing can express feelings and emotions to others and influence their mood of the day.

'seeing'拼写错误，应为'singing'。'others mood'应为'others' mood'或'their mood'。