Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to avoid filler words such as 'uh' and 'umm' to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Also, structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by a reason, and keep it concise within 5 sentences. For example, you could say: "Yes, I enjoy singing because it makes me feel happy and improves my mood."

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy singing because it makes me feel happy and improves my mood. Whenever I sing, I feel more relaxed and positive, which helps me cope with stress.

Sugestão: Avoid repeating phrases and try to use more natural expressions. Also, provide a clear topic sentence and support it with details. For example, you could say: "I tried to learn singing when I was a child, but my teachers told me I lacked the ability."

Exemplo: I tried to learn singing when I was about six or seven years old, but my teachers told me I lacked the ability. Despite that, I still enjoy singing for fun.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains many filler words. Try to give a direct answer first, then add supporting details using linking words. For example: "I prefer to sing when I am alone because I don't like being in the spotlight."

Exemplo: I prefer to sing when I am alone because I don't like being in the spotlight. Singing alone allows me to relax and enjoy the music without feeling self-conscious.

Sugestão: Try to reduce hesitation and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, be more specific about how singing affects emotions. For example: "Yes, I believe singing is a powerful way to express emotions and can influence people's feelings, making them happy or sad."

Exemplo: Yes, I believe singing is a powerful way to express emotions and can influence people's feelings. For instance, a cheerful song can lift someone's mood, while a sad song might help them process their feelings.

× Ah yeah, I like singing, uh, because it umm, makes me happy and uh, when I, umm, said it helps me to improve my uh, mood.

✓ Ah yeah, I like singing, uh, because it umm, makes me happy and uh, when I, umm, say it helps me to improve my uh, mood.

The verb 'said' is the past tense and past participle form, but the sentence context requires the present tense 'say' to indicate a current statement or belief. Using 'say' correctly matches the present context of the sentence.

× When I was a child, about six or seven years old, I tried to learn singing, but my teachers said that I did not have any ability have any ability for singing.

✓ When I was a child, about six or seven years old, I tried to learn singing, but my teachers said that I did not have any ability for singing.

The phrase 'have any ability have any ability' is a repetition error. Removing the repeated phrase corrects the sentence. Also, 'did not have any ability for singing' is correct past tense usage.

× So I already said that I, uh, have no ability of singing, so I prefer to sing uh, when I'm alone, uh, and uh, I don't like, uh, when I'm a spot handle of spotlight, umm, so I enjoy when I'm here alone and.

✓ So I already said that I, uh, have no ability in singing, so I prefer to sing, uh, when I'm alone, uh, and uh, I don't like, uh, when I'm in the spotlight, umm, so I enjoy when I'm here alone.

The preposition 'of' is incorrect after 'ability'; the correct preposition is 'in'. Also, 'a spot handle of spotlight' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'in the spotlight'. These corrections improve the naturalness and grammatical accuracy of the sentence.

× Yeah, I think that, uh, singing is one way, uh, uh, in order to express your, uh, emotion and feelings, umm, and also, uh, I think that uh, singing can make happy, uh, make people happy or sad. Umm, it's a have has a really big impact on people.

✓ Yeah, I think that, uh, singing is one way, uh, uh, in order to express your, uh, emotions and feelings, umm, and also, uh, I think that uh, singing can make people happy or sad. Umm, it has a really big impact on people.

The phrase 'make happy' is incomplete and needs the object 'people' to be clear. Also, 'it's a have has' is incorrect; the correct form is 'it has'. Additionally, 'emotion' should be plural 'emotions' to match 'feelings'. These corrections clarify meaning and fix grammatical errors.