Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih alami serta efektif. Hindari kalimat yang bertentangan seperti 'I love my singing ability' jika sebelumnya mengatakan tidak suka bernyanyi. Gunakan kalimat yang jelas dan langsung menjawab pertanyaan.

Exemplo: No, I don't like singing because I don't think I have a good voice. I prefer listening to music because it relaxes me more.

Sugestão: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan struktur kalimat yang benar. Gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren dan tambahkan detail spesifik.

Exemplo: No, I have never learned formal singing. I prefer listening to music because I doubt my own singing ability and feel shy to sing in public.

Sugestão: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kata yang tepat seperti 'enjoyable' bukan 'enjoyful'. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih alami dan tambahkan detail untuk memperkaya jawaban.

Exemplo: I would love to sing for my family because singing is a family tradition. It always creates enjoyable moments and brings us closer together.

Sugestão: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan buat jawaban lebih jelas dan logis. Gunakan kata penghubung untuk menghubungkan ide dan berikan alasan yang lebih spesifik.

Exemplo: I don't think singing brings happiness to everyone because some people prefer listening to music rather than singing themselves.

× I prefer to listening music rather than singing.

✓ I prefer listening to music rather than singing.

The verb 'prefer' is followed by the gerund form without 'to'. Also, 'listening' should be followed by the preposition 'to' when referring to music. So, 'prefer listening to music' is correct.

× No, I never learn of formal singing.

✓ No, I have never learned formal singing.

The sentence refers to an experience up to now, so the present perfect tense 'have never learned' is appropriate. Also, 'learn of' is incorrect; it should be 'learned' or 'learnt' without 'of'.

× I prefer listening music because I doubt my singing ability.

✓ I prefer listening to music because I doubt my singing ability.

The verb 'listening' requires the preposition 'to' when followed by the object 'music'. So, 'listening to music' is correct.

× Family Of course I would love to sing for my family.

✓ Family. Of course, I would love to sing for my family.

The original sentence lacks proper punctuation and conjunction. Adding a period after 'Family' and a comma after 'Of course' improves clarity and sentence structure.

× if I sing for them it will be enjoyful moment for them.

✓ If I sing for them, it will be an enjoyable moment for them.

The word 'enjoyful' is not commonly used; 'enjoyable' is the correct adjective. Also, the sentence needs an article 'an' before 'enjoyable moment' and a comma after the conditional clause.

× No, in my opinion I don't believe it because for some people rather enjoy listening music than singing.

✓ No, in my opinion, I don't believe it because some people rather enjoy listening to music than singing.

The phrase 'listening music' is incorrect; it should be 'listening to music'. Also, the word 'for' before 'some people' is unnecessary and should be removed. Adding commas improves readability.