Singing— Part 1 Relatório
Conversa
Part 1
Examinador
Do you like singing? Why?
Candidato
Yes, I like singing because singing bring myself many happiness.
Examinador
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Candidato
I haven't learn how to sing because my family is not many.
Examinador
Who do you want to sing for?
Candidato
I want to sing from parents, my friends and everyone in my life because their support for me.
Examinador
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Candidato
I think singing can bring happiness to people because it's so funny when I said singing have me so happy and funny in my life.
Avaliação
Total
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
Pontuação: 40.0Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn cần sử dụng ngữ pháp chính xác hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'bring' thay vì 'brings'. Bạn nên nói rõ hơn về lý do tại sao bạn thích hát và làm cho câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.
Exemplo: Yes, I like singing because it brings me a lot of happiness and helps me relax after a long day.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Pontuação: 30.0Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp (learn thay vì learnt). Ngoài ra, câu trả lời không liên quan đến câu hỏi. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và giải thích rõ ràng hơn.
Exemplo: No, I have never learnt how to sing formally because my family couldn't afford singing lessons.
Who do you want to sing for?
Pontuação: 35.0Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn có lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu không chính xác. Bạn nên sử dụng giới từ đúng và làm rõ ý muốn hát cho ai, cùng với lý do cụ thể hơn.
Exemplo: I want to sing for my parents, friends, and everyone who supports me because their encouragement means a lot to me.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Pontuação: 30.0Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp như 'funny' thay vì 'fun' hoặc 'joyful'. Bạn nên diễn đạt ý tưởng rõ ràng và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn.
Exemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it is enjoyable and helps me feel joyful in my life.
Gramática
× Yes, I like singing because singing bring myself many happiness.
✓ Yes, I like singing because singing brings me much happiness.
The verb 'bring' should be in the third person singular form 'brings' to agree with the singular subject 'singing'. 'Myself' is incorrectly used; the correct pronoun is 'me'. 'Many happiness' is incorrect because 'happiness' is an uncountable noun; 'much happiness' is appropriate.
× I haven't learn how to sing because my family is not many.
✓ I haven't learned how to sing because my family is small.
The verb 'learn' should be in the past participle form 'learned' after 'haven't'. 'My family is not many' is incorrect; 'family' is a singular noun and 'many' is used with countable nouns. The correct expression is 'my family is small'.
× I want to sing from parents, my friends and everyone in my life because their support for me.
✓ I want to sing for my parents, my friends, and everyone in my life because of their support for me.
The preposition 'from' is incorrect here; 'sing for' is the correct phrase to indicate the audience. Also, 'because their support for me' is incomplete; it should be 'because of their support for me'.
× I think singing can bring happiness to people because it's so funny when I said singing have me so happy and funny in my life.
✓ I think singing can bring happiness to people because it's so fun when I say singing makes me so happy and joyful in my life.
'Funny' is incorrect in this context; 'fun' or 'joyful' is appropriate. 'Said' should be 'say' to match the present tense. 'Singing have me' is incorrect; it should be 'singing makes me' to agree with singular subject and correct verb usage.
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