Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is short and somewhat unclear. Try to give a clear topic sentence and explain why singing is peaceful for you using simple and correct English. Avoid contractions like 'cause; instead, use 'because'.

Exemplo: Yes, I like singing because it makes me feel peaceful and relaxed. When I sing, my mind becomes calm and I forget my worries.

Sugestão: Your answer is confusing and has grammatical errors. Try to answer directly and clearly. Use correct tense and sentence structure. Mention that you learned singing from YouTube and explain briefly.

Exemplo: Yes, I have learned how to sing by watching videos on YouTube. I enjoy learning new songs and practicing them at home.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Try to give a clear topic sentence and explain why you want to sing for yourself. Use simple and correct English.

Exemplo: I want to sing for myself because I enjoy lovely songs. Singing makes me happy and relaxed.

Sugestão: Your answer repeats ideas and has grammatical mistakes. Try to give a clear opinion and explain why singing brings happiness using simple and correct sentences. Avoid repetition.

Exemplo: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it makes their minds peaceful. Singing helps people feel joyful and improves their mood.

× Yes, I like singing 'cause this is peaceful in my mind.

✓ Yes, I like singing because it is peaceful for my mind.

The conjunction 'cause' is informal and should be replaced with 'because' for clarity and correctness. Also, 'this is peaceful in my mind' is awkward; 'it is peaceful for my mind' is clearer.

× Yes, I yes, I have ever learned to sing this.

✓ Yes, I have learned to sing.

The phrase 'have ever learned' is incorrect here; 'ever' is unnecessary. Also, 'I yes, I' is redundant and should be removed.

× It's YouTube.

✓ I learned from YouTube.

The sentence 'It's YouTube' is incomplete and unclear. It should specify the source of learning, e.g., 'I learned from YouTube.'

× I learn.

✓ I learned.

The verb 'learn' should be in past tense 'learned' to match the context of past action.

× I was learn saying in YouTube platform.

✓ I was learning to sing on the YouTube platform.

Incorrect verb form 'was learn' should be 'was learning' (past continuous). Also, 'saying' is incorrect; it should be 'to sing'. Preposition 'in' should be 'on' for platforms.

× I want to sing for myself 'cause I like lovely song.

✓ I want to sing for myself because I like lovely songs.

The pronoun 'myself' is acceptable but 'lovely song' should be plural 'lovely songs' to generalize. Also, 'cause' should be 'because' for formality.

× I it's glad me.

✓ It makes me glad.

The sentence structure is incorrect. 'I it's glad me' should be 'It makes me glad' to express the feeling properly.

× It's peaceful people mind.

✓ It is peaceful for people's minds.

The phrase lacks possessive form; 'people mind' should be 'people's minds'. Also, preposition 'for' is needed.

× And I'll glad people, it's glad people.

✓ And it makes people glad.

'I'll glad people' and 'it's glad people' are incorrect. The correct form is 'it makes people glad'.

× And this is this is happiness of our life.

✓ And this is the happiness of our life.

Repetition 'this is this is' is an error. Also, 'happiness of our life' should be 'the happiness of our life' with definite article.