Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to avoid repetition and minor errors. For example, 'seeing' should be 'singing'. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy singing, especially when I'm with my friends. For instance, we often go to karaoke bars during our free time, which is always a lot of fun. Singing together not only entertains us but also lifts everyone's mood.

Sugestão: Use correct verb tenses and avoid redundancy. Instead of repeating 'learn how to sing', vary your expressions. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

Exemplo: Actually, I have never taken singing lessons because I was usually very busy with my studies and work. However, I hope to learn singing in the future when I have more free time.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but could be improved by adding linking words and more specific details. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas.

Exemplo: I would like to sing for my mum because I believe singing is a wonderful way to express my love and appreciation. By doing so, I hope to make her feel happy and cherished.

Sugestão: Be careful with word choice and grammar; 'seeing' should be 'singing'. Also, clarify your ideas and use linking words to connect them logically. Avoid awkward phrases like 'be behind the words'.

Exemplo: Of course, I believe singing can bring a lot of happiness to people because it allows us to express emotions beyond words. Moreover, it helps people feel more relaxed and connected with each other.

× I usually go to a karaoke when I am free with my friends.

✓ I usually go to karaoke when I am free with my friends.

The word 'karaoke' is an uncountable noun when referring to the activity or place in general, so the article 'a' is unnecessary and incorrect here. Removing 'a' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× I think seeing can also make everyone happy.

✓ I think singing can also make everyone happy.

The word 'seeing' is a typo or incorrect word choice here; the intended word is 'singing'. Using the correct pronoun or word is essential for clarity and meaning.

× Actually not. I never learn how to sing because I was usually very very busy with my study and my work, so I don't have time to learn how to sing.

✓ Actually not. I never learned how to sing because I was usually very very busy with my study and my work, so I didn't have time to learn how to sing.

The verb 'learn' should be in the past tense 'learned' to match the past time frame indicated by 'never' and 'was'. Also, 'don't have' should be 'didn't have' to maintain past tense consistency.

× I think seeing can make people very quite happy because it is a way to share how I care for each other, be behind the words and also it can make people more feel more relaxed.

✓ I think singing can make people quite happy because it is a way to share how we care for each other, be behind the words and also it can make people feel more relaxed.

'Seeing' should be 'singing' as the topic is singing. 'I care for each other' is incorrect because 'each other' requires a plural subject; 'we care for each other' is correct. Also, 'more feel more relaxed' is redundant; 'feel more relaxed' is correct.