Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting grammar and making it more concise. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid repetition. For example, instead of 'sometimes whenever' use 'sometimes' or 'whenever'. Also, use the correct verb forms like 'I usually start singing' and 'I sing songs with my friends'.

Exemplo: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and lift my mood. Whenever I am alone at home, I usually start singing songs, which brings a smile to my face. Additionally, singing with my friends is an unforgettable experience that I really enjoy.

Sugestão: Your answer needs better grammar and clearer structure. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid redundancy. For example, instead of repeating 'whenever', use 'because' or 'as'. Also, correct verb tenses like 'I start singing' instead of 'I started singing'.

Exemplo: Honestly, I have never learned to sing from anyone because no one in my family likes singing. I am the only one who enjoys it. When I am alone at home, I often sing in front of the mirror, which helps me improve my confidence and pronunciation.

Sugestão: Your answer can be improved by using clearer sentence structure and correct verb forms. Use linking words like 'because' and 'when' appropriately. Also, avoid redundancy and be more specific about your feelings and reasons.

Exemplo: I usually sing for myself because it boosts my confidence and makes me happy. When I feel stressed or overwhelmed, I sing folk or classical songs, which help me relax and feel better.

Sugestão: Your answer needs to be more concise and grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. Avoid awkward phrases like 'people faces' and incorrect verb forms like 'listening a songs'. Be specific and clear in your explanation.

Exemplo: I believe singing can bring happiness to many people. For example, when people are stressed or facing difficulties, listening to songs while traveling or at home can lift their spirits and create unforgettable joyful moments.

× I like singing because I think it is one of the best thing to relax my mood.

✓ I like singing because I think it is one of the best things to relax my mood.

The phrase 'one of the best thing' is incorrect because 'one of the' should be followed by a plural noun. Here, 'thing' should be pluralized to 'things' to agree with the phrase.

× Sometimes whenever I am alone at home, I usually started singing songs which helps a lot to lift my mood and bring a smile on my face.

✓ Sometimes whenever I am alone at home, I usually start singing songs which help a lot to lift my mood and bring a smile to my face.

The verb 'started' is in past tense but the sentence context is habitual action, so present tense 'start' is appropriate. Also, 'helps' should be 'help' to agree with plural 'songs'. 'Bring a smile on my face' should be 'bring a smile to my face' as the correct preposition is 'to'.

× Sometimes I singing song with my friends which is also an unforgettable experience.

✓ Sometimes I sing songs with my friends which is also an unforgettable experience.

The phrase 'I singing' is incorrect; the verb should be in base form 'sing' after the subject 'I'. Also, 'song' should be plural 'songs' to match the context.

× I'm the only girl who likes singing and whenever I'm alone at home I started singing in front of the mirror because whenever I do this it helps a lot to improve my confidence even though my pronunciation also so.

✓ I'm the only girl who likes singing and whenever I'm alone at home I start singing in front of the mirror because whenever I do this it helps a lot to improve my confidence even though my pronunciation is not perfect yet.

The verb 'started' is past tense but the context is habitual action, so 'start' in present tense is correct. The phrase 'my pronunciation also so' is unclear and ungrammatical; it is corrected to 'my pronunciation is not perfect yet' for clarity.

× I use this thing for myself because I think whenever I started singing for myself it helps to a lot to boost my confidence and it brings a happiness on my face because sometimes whenever I am in overburden or I am in stress I usually started singing songs like folk or classical music which helps me a lot.

✓ I use this thing for myself because I think whenever I start singing for myself it helps a lot to boost my confidence and it brings happiness to my face because sometimes whenever I am overburdened or stressed I usually start singing songs like folk or classical music which helps me a lot.

The verbs 'started' should be in present tense 'start' to match habitual action. 'Helps to a lot' is incorrect; 'helps a lot' is correct. 'Brings a happiness on my face' should be 'brings happiness to my face' with correct article and preposition. 'In overburden' and 'in stress' are incorrect; correct forms are 'overburdened' and 'stressed'.

× I usually started singing songs like folk or classical music which helps me a lot.

✓ I usually start singing songs like folk or classical music which help me a lot.

The verb 'started' should be present tense 'start' for habitual action. Also, 'songs' is plural, so the verb should be 'help' not 'helps'.

× Because sometimes if people are overburdened and they have faced a lot of circumstances in their life but whenever they go for traveling and while traveling they listening a songs or sometimes at home then it brings a lot of happiness on their face which is unforgettable experience.

✓ Because sometimes if people are overburdened and have faced a lot of circumstances in their lives, whenever they go traveling or while traveling they listen to songs or sometimes at home, it brings a lot of happiness to their faces which is an unforgettable experience.

The phrase 'they listening a songs' is incorrect; it should be 'they listen to songs'. 'A songs' is incorrect; 'songs' is plural and does not need 'a'. 'In their life' should be plural 'in their lives'. 'Brings a lot of happiness on their face' should be 'brings a lot of happiness to their faces' with correct preposition and plural form. Also, sentence structure is improved for clarity.