Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to give a clear and concise answer directly addressing the question. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and keep your answer within 5 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. However, I prefer listening to songs since I feel my voice is not very good. Despite that, I sometimes sing along with my favourite music for fun.

Sugestão: Make sure to complete your sentences and provide a full response. Use linking words to connect ideas and explain your experience clearly and logically.

Exemplo: Yes, I learnt how to sing when I was a child. My teacher taught me the fundamentals and principles of singing. However, when I was around 16 or 17, I focused more on my studies and stopped taking lessons.

Sugestão: Avoid repetition and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent and natural.

Exemplo: If I were to sing, I would definitely sing for my husband because he is very supportive. He always encourages me and says my voice is nice and clear, which motivates me to sing for him.

Sugestão: Try to organise your ideas more clearly using linking words like 'however' or 'on the other hand'. Also, avoid repetition and ensure your sentences are complete and grammatically correct.

Exemplo: I think singing can bring happiness depending on the type of song. For example, listening to love or entertaining songs can make people feel happy. However, if someone listens to sad songs while feeling down, it might make them feel even more unhappy.

× Honestly, I do like singing, but I mean, I mean I do like listening to songs, but I don't like to sing because I think I don't have a good voice and I think that singing needs a good and nice voice. So and also I find it like singing is like.

✓ Honestly, I do like singing, but I mean, I do like listening to songs, but I don't like singing because I think I don't have a good voice and I think that singing needs a good and nice voice. Also, I find singing is like.

The phrase 'I don't like to sing' is grammatically correct but inconsistent with the use of gerunds in the sentence. Using 'I don't like singing' maintains parallel structure with 'I do like singing' and 'I do like listening'. Also, the phrase 'So and also I find it like singing is like' is unclear and awkward; simplifying to 'Also, I find singing is like' improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, when I was a child, I had a teacher that he taught me how to sing and he taught me the fundamentals and principles of singing. But when I read when I became like 16 or 17 years old, I focused on my studies and.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I had a teacher who taught me how to sing and he taught me the fundamentals and principles of singing. But when I reached about 16 or 17 years old, I focused on my studies.

The phrase 'that he taught me' is incorrect; 'who taught me' is the correct relative pronoun for people. Also, 'when I read when I became like 16 or 17 years old' is incorrect; it should be 'when I reached about 16 or 17 years old' to correctly express age progression in past tense. The sentence was incomplete and has been completed for clarity.

× Well, if I want to sing, I'll definitely sing for my husband. He's my beloved 1 and I like singing for him. He always encouraged me to sing and he says that my voice is very nice and clear. So I'm if I want to sing, I will definitely sing for him.

✓ Well, if I want to sing, I'll definitely sing for my husband. He's my beloved one and I like singing for him. He always encourages me to sing and he says that my voice is very nice and clear. So if I want to sing, I will definitely sing for him.

The phrase 'He's my beloved 1' should be 'He's my beloved one' for correct word usage. The verb tense 'He always encouraged me' is inconsistent with the present tense 'he says'; it should be 'He always encourages me' to maintain present tense consistency. The phrase 'So I'm if I want to sing' is incorrect and has been corrected to 'So if I want to sing' for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Actually it depends if you if you listen to a love songs or an entertaining song so you will feel happy but if you listen to a sad song so if you are in a depressing or you feel unhappy so you will be definitely unhappy.

✓ Actually, it depends. If you listen to love songs or an entertaining song, you will feel happy. But if you listen to a sad song, and you are feeling depressed or unhappy, you will definitely feel unhappy.

The phrase 'a love songs' is incorrect because 'songs' is plural and should not have the article 'a'. It should be 'love songs' without an article. The sentence is run-on and lacks proper punctuation; breaking it into shorter sentences improves clarity. The phrase 'if you are in a depressing' is incorrect; it should be 'if you are feeling depressed' to use the correct adjective form. Also, 'you will be definitely unhappy' is awkward; 'you will definitely feel unhappy' is more natural.