Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and relevant, but you can improve by using more varied vocabulary and linking words to make your response more natural and coherent. Try to avoid repeating similar ideas and add a linking phrase to connect your points smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it allows me to relax after a busy school day. Moreover, as a member of my school choir and having taken a singing exam, I have improved my skills significantly. Singing not only brings me joy but also boosts my confidence.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. To improve, focus on correct sentence structure, use linking words for coherence, and avoid redundancy. Also, be specific about the experiences to enrich your answer.

Exemplo: Yes, I have learned how to sing, especially when preparing for the APR Sam Singing Sam competition. Additionally, regular choir practice has helped me improve my skills. These experiences have boosted my confidence to perform in front of classmates, friends, and audiences.

Sugestão: Your answer is heartfelt and relevant, but there are some grammatical mistakes and awkward expressions. To improve, use correct verb forms and plural/singular agreement, and include linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: I want to sing for my parents because they always take care of me despite their busy workdays. Singing is my way of showing gratitude and appreciation for their constant support. For example, I would choose songs that express thanks and love to make them feel special and appreciated.

Sugestão: Your answer shows good intention but is unclear and contains many grammatical errors and repetitions. To improve, organize your ideas clearly, use correct tenses, and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to make your answer coherent and specific.

Exemplo: Yes, I once went to an elderly home and sang for the residents. They seemed very happy and even sang along with me. It was clear that they enjoyed the performance, and I hope to bring more happiness to others through singing.

× I have also taken a singing exam to improve my skills.

✓ I have also taken a singing exam to improve my skills.

No correction needed here as the present perfect tense is correctly used to indicate an action completed at an unspecified time before now.

× Yes, I have learned to sing especially when I prepare for the APR Sam Singing Sam.

✓ Yes, I have learned to sing especially when I prepared for the APR Sam Singing Sam.

The phrase 'especially when I prepare' should be in past tense 'prepared' to match the past action of learning to sing for a specific event.

× I really enjoyed this experiences and they gave me more confidence to sing well in front of my classmates, friends or audience.

✓ I really enjoyed these experiences and they gave me more confidence to sing well in front of my classmates, friends, or audience.

'This experiences' is incorrect because 'experiences' is plural and should be preceded by 'these' instead of 'this'. Also, a comma is added before 'or' in a list for clarity.

× I want to sing for my parents because they always take cares of me even though they have a busy days of work and also saying it's my way of showing gratitude and appreciation for their constant support.

✓ I want to sing for my parents because they always take care of me even though they have busy days of work, and also saying it's my way of showing gratitude and appreciation for their constant support.

'Take cares' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'take care'. Also, 'a busy days' is incorrect because 'days' is plural and should not be preceded by 'a'. The correct phrase is 'busy days'.

× and also saying it's my way of showing gratitude and appreciation for their constant support.

✓ and also because it's my way of showing gratitude and appreciation for their constant support.

The phrase 'and also saying' is incomplete and incorrect. It should be 'and also because' to properly connect the clause and clarify the reason.

× Yes, last time I heard went to a kind of elderly home and I sing for them and they really seem very happy, like they enjoy what I have said and they they nearly sang with me and they it you can see that they're really enjoying it and I really hope to bring more happiness.

✓ Yes, last time I went to a kind of elderly home and I sang for them, and they really seemed very happy, like they enjoyed what I said and they nearly sang with me. You could see that they were really enjoying it, and I really hope to bring more happiness.

Multiple tense errors: 'heard went' is incorrect; 'I went' is correct. 'I sing' should be 'I sang' to match past tense. 'They really seem' should be 'they really seemed'. 'They enjoy' should be 'they enjoyed'. 'They it you can see' is unclear and corrected to 'You could see'. Consistent past tense is needed to describe past events.