Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer seems to confuse 'singing' with 'thinking'. Make sure to directly answer the question about singing. Also, keep your answer clear and concise, and avoid unrelated topics. Try to provide a direct response with supporting details related to singing.

Exemplo: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. Singing makes me feel happy and improves my mood, especially when I sing my favorite songs.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to directly answer the question with clear sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas and be specific about your experience or lack thereof with singing.

Exemplo: No, I have never learned how to sing professionally. I enjoy listening to others sing, but I haven't taken any singing lessons or tried to improve my singing skills.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and unclear. Try to avoid repeating phrases and provide specific reasons or feelings about why you want to sing for those people. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

Exemplo: I want to sing for my favorite people, such as my mom and sister, because I love them and want to express my appreciation and affection through music.

Sugestão: Your answer confuses 'singing' with 'thinking' again. Make sure to address the question about singing. Provide clear reasons why singing can bring happiness, and use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it allows them to express their feelings and connect with others. Moreover, singing uplifting songs can improve mood and create a joyful atmosphere.

× Yes, thinking is my favorite activity, it gives me good emotions and cheer me to do hard things in life and it's good for my mental health.

✓ Yes, singing is my favorite activity, it gives me good emotions and cheers me to do hard things in life and it's good for my mental health.

The word 'thinking' is incorrect here; the question is about singing, so 'singing' should be used. Also, 'cheer' should be 'cheers' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× I do not have experience and I don't have the desire to learn thing and learn thinking.

✓ I do not have experience and I don't have the desire to learn singing and learn to sing.

The word 'thing' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'singing' to match the context. Also, 'learn thinking' is incorrect; it should be 'learn to sing' to express the intended meaning.

× And also I'm not interested to learn thing, I just listen someone who sing.

✓ And also I'm not interested in learning singing, I just listen to someone who sings.

The phrase 'interested to learn' should be 'interested in learning'. 'Learn thing' should be 'learning singing'. Also, 'listen someone' should be 'listen to someone', and 'who sing' should be 'who sings' to agree with the singular subject.

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Who do you want to sing for?

This sentence is correct and does not require correction.

× I want to sing for my favorite my favorite people, for example my mom did and my sister.

✓ I want to sing for my favorite people, for example, my mom and my sister.

The phrase 'my favorite my favorite people' is repetitive; it should be 'my favorite people'. The word 'did' is unnecessary and incorrect here and should be removed.

× I love them and I love and like to say good words for them.

✓ I love them and I like to say good words to them.

The phrase 'I love and like to say' is redundant; 'I like to say' suffices. Also, 'say good words for them' should be 'say good words to them' because 'say to' is the correct preposition with 'say' when indicating the recipient.

× Yes, I think that thinking bring happiness to people 'cause when you think you find the best word to influence someone and it's some way to delight people and give them joy.

✓ Yes, I think that singing brings happiness to people because when you sing you find the best words to influence someone and it's a way to delight people and give them joy.

'Thinking' should be 'singing' to match the topic. 'Bring' should be 'brings' to agree with singular subject 'singing'. 'Cause' should be 'because' for formal correctness. 'Think you find' should be 'sing you find' to maintain topic consistency. 'Word' should be plural 'words' as it refers to multiple words. 'It's some way' should be 'it's a way' for correct article usage.