Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议注意动词形式和句子结构，使表达更自然流畅。例如，将“don't have a skills for seeing”改为“don't have the skills for singing”，并且避免重复和冗余。

Exemplo: I don't like singing because I don't have the skills for it, and singing in front of many people makes me feel shy and lose confidence.

Sugestão: 回答中时态和语法错误较多，建议使用正确的时态和句子结构，并且表达更具体。例如，将“we're in a primary school”改为“I was in primary school”，并且说明学习经历。

Exemplo: Yes, I took some singing classes when I was in primary school, but I didn't follow any strict rules. I believe singing well requires talent.

Sugestão: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，建议注意冠词和动词形式，同时使句子更简洁自然。

Exemplo: I want to sing for my close friends or family because I don't have to worry about singing well. It's just a relaxing activity that makes me feel comfortable.

Sugestão: 回答中表达不够连贯，建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并且注意代词的正确使用。

Exemplo: Yes, singing with friends or family can relax our mood, reduce stress, and is a good activity for us to enjoy together.

× I don't like singing because I don't have a skills for seeing and maybe singing make me lose confidence and when there are many people saying make me shy.

✓ I don't like singing because I don't have the skills for singing and maybe singing makes me lose confidence, and when there are many people singing, it makes me shy.

skills 是复数形式，前面不应该用不定冠词 a。seeing 应为 singing，动词形式错误。singing 后主语单数，谓语动词应加 s。many people 后应是动名词 singing 作为主语。句子中缺少逗号分隔，影响理解。

× Yeah, to be honest, we're in a primary school. I take some class about singing but don't have any rules for me. So I think it's need talent to sing well.

✓ Yeah, to be honest, we were in primary school. I took some classes about singing but didn't have any rules for me. So I think it needs talent to sing well.

描述过去经历时，动词应使用过去时态。we're 应为 were。take 应为 took。class 应为复数 classes。don't 应为 didn't。it's need 应为 it needs，主谓一致错误。

× I want to sing for my close friend or my families because I don't need worry about how to sing well and it's just an activity for our to relax and make me comfortable.

✓ I want to sing for my close friends or my family because I don't need to worry about how to sing well and it's just an activity for us to relax and make me comfortable.

friend 和 family 复数形式应为 friends 和 family（family 作为集合名词通常用单数，但此处表示复数成员时用 family）。don't need 后应加 to 不定式。our 应为 us，代词用法错误。

× I want to sing for my close friend or my families because I don't need worry about how to sing well and it's just an activity for our to relax and make me comfortable.

✓ I want to sing for my close friends or my family because I don't need to worry about how to sing well and it's just an activity for us to relax and make me comfortable.

worry about 是固定搭配，缺少 to 不定式。our 应为 us，介词后应使用宾格代词。

× Yes, especially a thing with friends and or family. It can relax our mood and reduce pressure and it's a good activity for our.

✓ Yes, especially things with friends or family. It can relax our mood and reduce pressure and it's a good activity for us.

a thing 应为复数 things，表示泛指。and or 逻辑混乱，应改为 or。our 应为 us，介词后应使用宾格代词。