Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct sentence structures and avoid redundancy. For example, say "I don't like singing because it makes me feel uncomfortable, but I usually prefer listening to music." This is more natural and clear.

Exemplo: I don't like singing because it makes me feel uncomfortable, but I usually prefer listening to music.

Sugestão: Your answer needs better grammar and clarity. Use past tense correctly and avoid repetition. For example, "Yes, I tried to learn singing when I was a child, but I am very shy and uncomfortable singing in front of others." This improves fluency and coherence.

Exemplo: Yes, I tried to learn singing when I was a child, but I am very shy and uncomfortable singing in front of others.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Try to express your idea simply and clearly. For example, "I don't want to sing for anyone because I feel shy and uncomfortable." This is direct and natural.

Exemplo: I don't want to sing for anyone because I feel shy and uncomfortable.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but has some grammatical mistakes and awkward word choices. Use correct vocabulary and sentence structure. For example, "Yes, singing can bring happiness. My friend is very passionate about singing and sings every day to feel happy and refreshed."

Exemplo: Yes, singing can bring happiness. My friend is very passionate about singing and sings every day to feel happy and refreshed.

× Whenever I am singing I am a feeling uncomfortable but I am usually prefer to listening to music.

✓ Whenever I am singing, I feel uncomfortable but I usually prefer listening to music.

The phrase 'I am a feeling uncomfortable' is incorrect; the verb 'feel' should be used in simple present tense here as 'I feel uncomfortable'. Also, 'I am usually prefer to listening to music' is incorrect; 'prefer' is a stative verb and should be used in simple present tense without 'am', and 'to listening' should be 'listening' as the object of 'prefer'. Suggestions: Use 'I feel uncomfortable' instead of 'I am a feeling uncomfortable' and 'I usually prefer listening to music' instead of 'I am usually prefer to listening to music'.

× Yes, in my childhood time I was trying to sing.

✓ Yes, in my childhood I tried to sing.

The phrase 'I was trying to sing' is in past continuous tense, which is not appropriate here as the action is a completed past event. Also, 'childhood time' is redundant; 'childhood' alone is sufficient. Suggestion: Use simple past tense 'I tried to sing' and say 'in my childhood' instead of 'in my childhood time'.

× I'm a very shy person so I'm not comfortable sing singing in front of other.

✓ I'm a very shy person so I'm not comfortable singing in front of others.

The phrase 'sing singing' is a repetition error; only 'singing' is needed. Also, 'in front of other' is incorrect; the plural pronoun 'others' should be used. Suggestion: Use 'singing' once and 'in front of others'.

× No, I don't want to sing for anyone because I am a because I am trying to to singing for anyone then I am feeling very shy and uncomfortable.

✓ No, I don't want to sing for anyone because if I try to sing for anyone, I feel very shy and uncomfortable.

The original sentence is confusing and contains repetition and incorrect verb forms. 'I am a because I am trying to to singing for anyone' is incorrect and unclear. The corrected sentence uses 'if I try to sing for anyone' to express the condition and 'I feel' for the feeling. Suggestion: Use conditional 'if I try to sing for anyone' and simple present 'I feel' to express feelings.

× Your singing can bring happiness to people.

✓ Singing can bring happiness to people.

'Your singing' is awkward in this context; the general statement about singing should use the gerund 'Singing' without 'your'. Suggestion: Use 'Singing can bring happiness to people.'

× My friend is very passionate about the Singh.

✓ My friend is very passionate about singing.

'Singh' is a typo or incorrect word; the correct word is 'singing'. Suggestion: Correct the spelling to 'singing'.

× He is singing every day for his happiness and refreshment.

✓ He sings every day for his happiness and refreshment.

The present continuous tense 'He is singing every day' is less appropriate for habitual actions; simple present tense 'He sings every day' is preferred to express habitual actions. Suggestion: Use simple present tense 'He sings every day' to indicate habitual action.