Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is natural and shows your feelings well, but it is a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to keep your answers concise and avoid unnecessary phrases like 'Thank you'. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I love singing, although I'm not a professional. I usually sing when I'm alone, like in the bathroom or while cooking, because it helps me relax and reduces my stress.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but contains many fillers like 'uh' and some incomplete sentences. Try to avoid fillers and speak more fluently. Also, provide a clear and complete response with linking words to improve coherence.

Exemplo: To be honest, I have never formally learned how to sing. However, when I was in school, we had some basic singing classes that taught us fundamental techniques.

Sugestão: Your answer is heartfelt and clear, but it is a bit repetitive and could be more concise. Avoid repeating words like 'really' multiple times. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide a smoother flow.

Exemplo: Although I'm not a perfect singer, I enjoy singing songs by my favourite artists. I especially want to sing for my mom because she means a lot to me, and I miss her deeply while living abroad. Singing for her would make me feel proud.

Sugestão: Your answer has good ideas but contains a confusing phrase 'happiness to the fox who sings' which seems like a mistake. Also, avoid fillers like 'yeah' and try to use more precise vocabulary. Use linking words to connect your points clearly.

Exemplo: Definitely, singing can improve people's mood because it helps me relax. I believe it brings happiness to anyone who sings, and it's a wonderful way to enjoy yourself when you're alone.

× I love singing but I'm not a perfect singer so I sing when I'm in the bathroom so you can call me a bathroom singer actually.

✓ I love singing, but I'm not a perfect singer, so I sing when I'm in the bathroom; you can actually call me a bathroom singer.

The original sentence is a run-on sentence lacking proper punctuation. Adding commas and a semicolon improves clarity and sentence structure, which is essential for correct use of present participle phrases and overall readability.

× Also I sing when I'm alone in my room and while I'm cooking because I enjoy it and it helps me relax my mood and it makes me stress free.

✓ Also, I sing when I'm alone in my room and while I'm cooking because I enjoy it, and it helps me relax my mood and makes me stress-free.

Commas are needed to separate clauses for clarity. 'Stress free' should be hyphenated as 'stress-free' when used as an adjective. These corrections improve sentence flow and grammatical accuracy.

× To be honest, uh, I never learned how to sing, but, uh, when I was in my school, so at that time we had, uh, some singing classes also.

✓ To be honest, I never learned how to sing, but when I was in school, we had some singing classes as well.

The phrase 'in my school' is incorrect; 'in school' is the proper expression. Also, 'also' at the end is better replaced with 'as well' for naturalness. Removing filler words improves clarity.

× So at that time they used to teach us some basic.

✓ So at that time, they used to teach us some basics.

The word 'basic' is an adjective and needs a noun; 'basics' is the correct plural noun form here. Adding a comma after 'So at that time' improves sentence structure.

× So I want to sing the song for my mom because she is really close to my heart and in this country I really really really miss her.

✓ So I want to sing a song for my mom because she is really close to my heart, and I really, really, really miss her in this country.

'The song' implies a specific song previously mentioned; 'a song' is more appropriate here. The phrase 'in this country' is better placed at the end for natural flow. Commas separate repeated words for emphasis.

× So I want to sing for her and make her proud.

✓ So I want to sing for her and make her proud.

This sentence is correct as is; no correction needed.

× Definitely, yes, it can enhance people's mood because as I mentioned earlier, that it helps me relax.

✓ Definitely, yes, it can enhance people's moods because, as I mentioned earlier, it helps me relax.

'People's mood' should be plural 'people's moods' to refer to multiple individuals. The word 'that' is unnecessary and removed for clarity.

× So I believe that it brings happiness to the fox who sings.

✓ So I believe that it brings happiness to the folks who sing.

The word 'fox' is a typo or incorrect word; 'folks' is the correct term meaning people. This correction fixes the meaning and pronoun usage.

× Yeah, and it's a great way of enjoyment by yourself when you are alone.

✓ Yeah, it's a great way to enjoy yourself when you are alone.

The phrase 'way of enjoyment by yourself' is awkward. 'Way to enjoy yourself' is the correct and natural expression. Removing 'and' at the start improves sentence flow.