Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by correcting grammar and making it more concise. For example, avoid repeating 'singing' and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, use correct verb forms like 'keeps' instead of 'keep'.

Exemplo: Yes, I like singing, especially when I am working alone. I often hum my favorite songs because singing keeps me refreshed and uplifts my mood. Therefore, I believe singing is important for relaxation.

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains hesitations. Try to organize your ideas clearly and avoid filler words like 'umm' and 'uh'. Use linking words to explain your point logically and correct word choices like 'longed' which is incorrect here.

Exemplo: No, I have never had formal singing lessons. However, I have learned to sing by imitating other singers, which helped me improve my skills informally.

Sugestão: Your answer shows your idea but has some repetition and grammatical errors. Try to express your thoughts more clearly and avoid repeating words. Use linking words to connect your ideas and correct pronoun usage.

Exemplo: I prefer to sing for myself because it makes me happy. Singing in front of others makes me feel uncomfortable, so I enjoy singing alone where I can relax and enjoy the moment.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but contains some redundancy and hesitations. Try to be more concise and use linking words to make your answer coherent. Also, avoid repeating phrases like 'he is currently listening'.

Exemplo: Definitely, singing can bring happiness. People who love music often hum their favorite or trending songs, which makes them feel joyful. Knowing the lyrics and hitting the right tone adds to their enjoyment.

× I feel singing is good because it keep you refreshing and you uplift your mood.

✓ I feel singing is good because it keeps you refreshed and uplifts your mood.

The verb 'keep' should be in third person singular form 'keeps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'refreshing' should be changed to the past participle 'refreshed' to correctly describe the state caused by singing. Similarly, 'you uplift your mood' should be 'you uplift your mood' changed to 'uplifts your mood' to maintain subject-verb agreement.

× Officially, no, I have never longed to sing.

✓ Officially, no, I have never learned to sing.

The word 'longed' is incorrect here; the intended meaning is 'learned'. 'Longed' means desired strongly, which does not fit the context. The correct past participle of 'learn' is 'learned' (or 'learnt' in British English).

× But I learned singing while just copying some other singers while they were singing.

✓ But I learned singing by just copying some other singers while they were singing.

The phrase 'while just copying' is awkward; 'by just copying' better expresses the method of learning. The past tense 'learned' is correct here.

× I would like to sing for my own self because it is something that makes myself happy.

✓ I would like to sing for myself because it is something that makes me happy.

The reflexive pronoun 'myself' is incorrectly used as the object of 'makes'. The correct object pronoun is 'me'. 'My own self' is redundant; 'myself' suffices.

× You know, singing to other people. Would I, I, I would feel uncomfortable for that as well.

✓ You know, singing to other people, I would feel uncomfortable with that as well.

The phrase 'Would I, I, I would feel uncomfortable for that' is ungrammatical and redundant. The correct structure is 'I would feel uncomfortable with that'. Also, 'uncomfortable for that' should be 'uncomfortable with that'.

× If I can sing well in front of me, then I would feel happy.

✓ If I can sing well in front of myself, then I would feel happy.

The reflexive pronoun 'myself' should be used as the object of the preposition 'in front of' when referring back to the subject 'I'. 'Me' is incorrect here.

× And so that I wanna just sing for myself.

✓ And so I just want to sing for myself.

The phrase 'And so that I wanna just sing' is awkward and ungrammatical. 'Wanna' is informal; 'want to' is preferred. The sentence is better structured as 'And so I just want to sing for myself'.

× Definitely, you know, if someone loves singing, someone loves music, then he would obviously be humming his favorite or the latest trending song which he is currently listening. He or she is currently listening.

✓ Definitely, you know, if someone loves singing and music, then he or she would obviously be humming his or her favorite or the latest trending song that he or she is currently listening to.

The sentence is repetitive and awkward. Combining 'someone loves singing, someone loves music' into 'someone loves singing and music' is clearer. Also, 'which he is currently listening' should be 'that he or she is currently listening to' to be grammatically correct.

× And at that moment he would be happy to just know the lyrics he would be singing.

✓ And at that moment, he would be happy to just know the lyrics he is singing.

The phrase 'he would be singing' is conditional and awkward here; 'he is singing' fits better to describe the action happening at that moment.

× And if he could, he could just, you know, hit the tone.

✓ And if he can, he can just, you know, hit the tone.

The conditional 'could' is less appropriate here; 'can' is better to express ability in the present context.