Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答中表达不够自然，句子结构混乱，且有语法错误。建议简化句子，直接表达喜欢唱歌的原因，并避免重复和不连贯的表达。

Exemplo: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and feel better when I am sad.

Sugestão: 回答内容不够清晰，表达不连贯，且有语法错误。建议直接回答是否学过唱歌，并具体说明学习的经历和感受，使用连接词使句子更流畅。

Exemplo: I haven't taken formal singing lessons, but I practiced singing in my school's music club when I was in primary school, which helped me improve and make new friends.

Sugestão: 回答较为自然，但可以增加细节说明为什么不愿意为别人唱歌，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Exemplo: I prefer to sing only for myself because I am not confident in my singing skills, and I worry that others might laugh at me if I sing in front of them.

Sugestão: 回答中观点表达不够清晰，且有矛盾。建议明确表达观点，并用具体理由支持，避免否定部分造成理解困难。

Exemplo: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness because it helps people relax and express their emotions, even if they are not professional singers.

× I always say when I feel sad because singing is a relief and a comfort for me to overcome the dark time.

✓ I always sing when I feel sad because singing is a relief and a comfort for me to overcome the dark time.

这里的动词时态错误，原句中使用了“say”，但根据上下文，表达的是“我总是在感到难过时唱歌”，应使用动词“sing”的一般现在时。建议将“say”改为“sing”。

× I haven't formally participated in How to Sing, but I joined the school journal when I was in primary school to learn practicing for a while and I also knew some new friends.

✓ I haven't formally participated in How to Sing, but I joined the school journal when I was in primary school to practice for a while and I also made some new friends.

“learn practicing”搭配不当，应改为“practice”表示练习；“knew some new friends”时态错误，应该用过去式“made some new friends”表示结交了新朋友。

× for the people who are not good at singing it, of course not.

✓ for the people who are not good at singing, of course not.

句中“singing it”中的“it”多余，造成语法错误，应去掉“it”。