Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it contains a small error ('ride' instead of 'relax') and could be more concise. Avoid contractions like 'Cause' in formal speaking and try to use linking words to improve coherence.

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax after a long day at work. Additionally, it is a great way to relieve stress. Furthermore, my friends and I often go to karaoke bars together, which makes the experience even more enjoyable.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about your practice. Also, avoid starting sentences with 'But' in formal speech.

Exemplo: I have not had the chance to study singing formally. However, I used to practise singing popular songs I found on the Internet by myself. This helped me improve my English pronunciation and vocabulary in an enjoyable way.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors ('bring' should be 'brings'). Try to answer the question directly with a topic sentence and support it with specific details using linking words.

Exemplo: I like to sing for my friends and family because it brings us closer together. Moreover, singing creates a fun and exciting atmosphere that we all enjoy.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant and includes examples, but the last sentence is incomplete and contains grammatical errors. Use complete sentences and linking words to improve coherence and clarity.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because music strongly affects our emotions. For instance, listening to upbeat genres like pop or reggae can instantly lift your mood after a stressful day. Additionally, singing along to your favourite songs is a great way to relieve tension and feel happier.

× 'Cause I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and ride after a long day at work.

✓ 'Cause I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and rest after a long day at work.

The verb 'ride' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb is 'rest' to express relaxing after work. 'Ride' means to sit on and control a vehicle or animal, which does not fit the intended meaning.

× But I used to practice by sitting alone to popular song I found on the Internet.

✓ But I used to practice by sitting alone to popular songs I found on the Internet.

The noun 'song' should be plural 'songs' because it refers to multiple songs found on the Internet. Using the singular form here is incorrect as it does not agree with the context.

× But I used to practice by sitting alone to popular song I found on the Internet.

✓ But I used to practice by sitting alone with popular songs I found on the Internet.

The preposition 'to' is incorrect after 'sitting alone' in this context. The correct preposition is 'with' to indicate practicing using the songs.

× I enjoy singing and I love how singing bring all my friends and family together and we enjoy the atmosphere and the time we spend because it is fun and exciting.

✓ I enjoy singing and I love how singing brings all my friends and family together and we enjoy the atmosphere and the time we spend because it is fun and exciting.

The verb 'bring' should be 'brings' to agree with the singular subject 'singing'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue involving pronouns and verbs.

× Additionally, sing along to your favorite songs can be a great way to relieve tension and feel more.

✓ Additionally, singing along to your favorite songs can be a great way to relieve tension and feel better.

The phrase should use the gerund form 'singing' instead of the base verb 'sing' to function as the subject of the sentence. Also, 'feel more' is incomplete; 'feel better' is the correct expression.