Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it could be more concise and natural. Avoid redundancy such as "help me in relaxing" and "feels like it has a power to heal" which could be simplified. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy singing because I've developed a strong interest in music over time. Both listening to and singing music soothe me, especially when I'm stressed or emotional, as it has a healing effect.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question well but contains some grammatical errors (e.g., "helps" should be "help") and some redundancy. Try to use linking words like "although" to connect ideas and avoid repeating similar points.

Exemplo: No, I have never formally learned to sing because I don't have a good voice. Although I haven't taken singing classes, I sometimes sing when I'm stressed or depressed because it helps me relax and improve my mood.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete. The last sentence "By singing, I'll be able to think" is vague and does not add meaning. Also, there is a grammatical error with "and but". Try to provide a clear topic sentence and specific supporting details with proper linking words.

Exemplo: If I had the chance, I would sing for my mother to show my gratitude. She has faced many difficulties but always put her children first, so singing would be my way to express appreciation.

Sugestão: Your answer has good ideas but some phrases are unnatural, such as "It's a truth" and "sweet and smooth way." Also, avoid repeating similar ideas without linking words. Try to use more natural expressions and link your points logically.

Exemplo: I believe singing brings happiness because it allows us to express deep feelings and connect with others. Moreover, singing helps calm and relax us during difficult times, making it a wonderful source of joy.

× I find that both listening to music and singing can be very soothing and help me in relaxing, especially when I'm feeling stressed or emotional.

✓ I find that both listening to music and singing can be very soothing and help me relax, especially when I'm feeling stressed or emotional.

The phrase 'help me in relaxing' is incorrect because after 'help', the verb should be in the base form or 'to' + base form, not the gerund '-ing' form. Therefore, 'help me relax' is correct.

× However, I sometimes sing when I feel stressed or depressed because I helps me relax and improve my mood.

✓ However, I sometimes sing when I feel stressed or depressed because it helps me relax and improve my mood.

The subject 'I' does not agree with the verb 'helps'. The correct subject for 'helps' here is 'it' referring to singing. Therefore, 'it helps me relax' is correct.

× If I ever get a chance to sing, I would definitely sing for my mother because I will be able to show my gratitude that she has faced a lot of difficulties throughout her life and but she always put her children first.

✓ If I ever get a chance to sing, I would definitely sing for my mother because I will be able to show my gratitude that she has faced a lot of difficulties throughout her life but she always put her children first.

The conjunctions 'and' and 'but' are incorrectly combined as 'and but'. Only one conjunction should be used here. 'But' is appropriate to show contrast, so 'and' should be removed.

× By singing, I'll be able to think.

✓ By singing, I'll be able to express my feelings.

The sentence 'By singing, I'll be able to think.' is unclear and does not logically follow the context. It is better to clarify the intended meaning. Assuming the student means to express feelings or gratitude, the sentence should be corrected accordingly.