Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors that affect understanding. Try to respond directly to the question with clear sentences, avoid redundancy, and use correct vocabulary. For example, explain why you like singing and how it makes you feel, using simple and correct English.

Exemplo: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and feel happy. When I sing, I can forget my worries and enjoy the music. It is a good way to relieve stress after work.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to answer directly and clearly, using correct grammar and vocabulary. Explain briefly if you have taken lessons or learned by yourself, and how you practice singing.

Exemplo: No, I have never taken singing lessons, but I sometimes practice by following songs on YouTube or music apps. This helps me learn the melody and lyrics.

Sugestão: Your answer is confusing and contains irrelevant information. Try to answer the question directly by stating who you want to sing for and why. Use clear and simple sentences, and avoid unrelated phrases.

Exemplo: I usually sing for myself because it helps me relax. I enjoy peaceful music, and singing quietly makes me feel calm and happy.

Sugestão: Your answer is difficult to understand due to grammar and vocabulary mistakes. Try to express your opinion clearly and support it with reasons. Use simple sentences and correct words related to emotions and music.

Exemplo: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people. Music can make us feel different emotions like joy or excitement, and singing helps us express those feelings.

× Hi, yes I like saying cussing the sound, why I'm working, maybe more leisure and I can feel my path with the music.

✓ Hi, yes I like singing, causing the sound, while I'm working, maybe during leisure time, and I can feel my path with the music.

The student incorrectly used 'saying cussing' instead of 'singing causing'. The verb 'singing' is the correct present participle form to describe the action. Also, the sentence structure is unclear and needs rephrasing for clarity.

× Sometimes I would feel very anxious about what I'm doing so music made me happy.

✓ Sometimes I feel very anxious about what I'm doing, so music makes me happy.

The use of 'would' is incorrect here; the simple present 'feel' is appropriate to express habitual feelings. Also, 'made' should be 'makes' to agree with the present tense context.

× No, I never know how to sing, but I sometimes just follow the music app from the Internet or YouTube.

✓ No, I never knew how to sing, but I sometimes just follow music apps from the Internet or YouTube.

The verb 'know' should be in the past tense 'knew' to match 'never' indicating past experience. Also, 'music app' should be plural 'music apps' to generalize the statement.

× So I got you know how to sing the sound, the resume, that lyrics.

✓ So I learned how to sing the sounds, the rhythm, and the lyrics.

The phrase 'got you know' is incorrect; 'learned' is more appropriate. 'Resume' is incorrect here; likely the student meant 'rhythm'. Also, 'that lyrics' should be 'the lyrics'.

× I will say, just want just saying for myself, you know, everybody has their own music habits and they have their own story of the music.

✓ I would say, I just want to sing for myself, you know, everybody has their own music habits and their own story with music.

'Just want just saying' is incorrect; it should be 'just want to sing'. The verb form 'to sing' is the correct infinitive after 'want'.

× So everyone is different. I mean for me, I like more peaceful music. So just enjoy. My second file was sent.

✓ So everyone is different. I mean, for me, I like more peaceful music, so I just enjoy it. My second file was sent.

The phrase 'I like more peaceful music' is acceptable but could be clearer as 'I like peaceful music more'. 'So just enjoy' is incomplete and needs an object, e.g., 'I just enjoy it'. The last sentence seems unrelated and unclear.

× He of course the music is magic now saying can hear people.

✓ Yes, of course, music is magic; singing can be heard by people.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper structure. It needs to be rephrased for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× The different resume make you happy, make you excited also make you sad too, but mostly hapiness.

✓ Different rhythms make you happy, make you excited, and also make you sad, but mostly happiness.

'Resume' is incorrect; likely 'rhythms' is intended. Also, 'hapiness' is misspelled as 'happiness'. The sentence needs conjunctions for clarity.