Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer should be more grammatically correct and clearer. Try to start with a direct response, then explain why you like singing using simple and correct sentences. Avoid unclear phrases like 'get your voice is some multi voices'.

Exemplo: Yes, I like singing because it makes me feel free and happy. When I sing, I can express my emotions and enjoy different melodies.

Sugestão: Please use correct tense and sentence structure. Start with a direct answer, then explain how you learnt singing with clear details. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases like 'look at a look at'.

Exemplo: Yes, when I was 18 years old, I learned how to sing by watching tutorials on YouTube and practicing the song lyrics.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Please directly answer who you want to sing for, and explain why. Avoid mentioning unrelated words like 'Etsy'.

Exemplo: I want to sing songs by Ajit Singh because I admire his voice and style.

Sugestão: Your answer is difficult to understand due to grammar and unclear phrases. Please give a clear opinion and explain with simple reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because songs can touch their hearts and make them feel joyful.

× Yeah, I like to singing because it's making me feel free and get your voice is some multi voices that make me happy.

✓ Yeah, I like singing because it makes me feel free and my voice can produce multiple tones that make me happy.

The phrase 'like to singing' is incorrect; after 'like', the verb should be in the gerund form without 'to', so 'like singing' is correct. Also, 'it's making me feel' should be 'it makes me feel' to express a general truth. The phrase 'get your voice is some multi voices' is unclear and grammatically incorrect; it is corrected to 'my voice can produce multiple tones' to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× Yeah, when I only 18 years old I look at a look at in YouTube how to sing and the lyrics of the song.

✓ Yeah, when I was only 18 years old, I looked at YouTube videos on how to sing and the lyrics of songs.

The sentence requires past tense verbs to describe a past event. 'I look' should be 'I looked', and 'when I only 18 years old' should be 'when I was only 18 years old'. Also, 'a look at in YouTube' is incorrect; it is corrected to 'looked at YouTube videos'. The phrase 'the lyrics of the song' is generalized to 'the lyrics of songs' for clarity.

× I like Ajit Singh song that's all I want to sing for at Etsy.

✓ I like Ajit Singh's songs; that's all I want to sing at events.

The original sentence has unclear structure and incorrect preposition usage. 'Ajit Singh song' should be possessive 'Ajit Singh's songs'. 'That's all I want to sing for at Etsy' is unclear; 'Etsy' is likely a mishearing or typo. Assuming the intended meaning is 'events', the sentence is corrected accordingly for clarity and proper preposition use.

× Yes, I think sing singing can bring happiness to people because when he is song or it will to melt people more happily or a flea minus with it a Melton's voices.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because when someone sings, it can make people feel happier or relaxed with melodious voices.

The phrase 'think sing singing' is incorrect; it should be 'think singing'. The rest of the sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect; it is rephrased to convey the intended meaning clearly. 'He is song' is corrected to 'someone sings', and 'melt people more happily' is changed to 'make people feel happier or relaxed'. The phrase 'a flea minus with it a Melton's voices' is unintelligible and replaced with 'melodious voices' for clarity.