Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and relevant, but there are some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use simpler, more natural expressions and correct grammar. Also, avoid redundancy by combining ideas more smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions by putting my feelings into words.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use correct verb forms and more natural expressions. Also, try to be concise and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: No, I have never learned to sing because I lacked confidence in my voice and felt too shy to take lessons.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains fragmented sentences. Try to organise your ideas logically and use linking words to connect them. Also, avoid unnecessary pauses and be more specific.

Exemplo: I don't want to sing for anyone in particular; rather, I want to develop singing as a skill. Additionally, I would like to sing occasionally at family events, such as on Mother's Day, to create a warm and pleasant atmosphere.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but a bit repetitive. Try to avoid repeating the same idea and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, use more precise vocabulary.

Exemplo: Yes, I strongly believe that singing brings happiness because it allows people to express their emotions through their voice, which can be very uplifting.

× Yes, actually I like singing very much. Becauses it gives me some sort of relief and helps me to express my emotions by taking some words out of my heart.

✓ Yes, actually I like singing very much because it gives me some sort of relief and helps me to express my emotions by taking some words out of my heart.

The word 'Becauses' is incorrect; the correct conjunction is 'because'. This error is a spelling mistake affecting the conjunction usage, which connects two clauses logically. Correcting it improves sentence clarity and grammatical correctness.

× No, actually I haven't ever learned how to sing because I was always under confident that I don't have that much pleasant or so much beautiful voice and I felt shy to learn singing.

✓ No, actually I have never learned how to sing because I was always underconfident that I didn't have a very pleasant or beautiful voice and I felt shy to learn singing.

The phrase 'haven't ever learned' is better expressed as 'have never learned' for naturalness. 'Under confident' should be one word 'underconfident'. The tense in 'don't have' should be past tense 'didn't have' to match the past context. Also, 'that much pleasant or so much beautiful voice' is awkward; 'a very pleasant or beautiful voice' is more natural. These corrections align verb tenses and improve adjective usage.

× Actually, I do not want to sing for someone special. I just want it as a skill. And. Moreover, I also want to sing it occasionally at my family events like on Mother's Day for this date to make a pleasant family environment.

✓ Actually, I do not want to sing for someone special. I just want it as a skill. Moreover, I also want to sing occasionally at my family events like on Mother's Day to create a pleasant family environment.

The phrase 'sing it occasionally at my family events' is better as 'sing occasionally at my family events' because 'sing' is intransitive and does not take an object 'it'. Also, 'for this date' is unnecessary and awkward; 'on Mother's Day' suffices. 'To make a pleasant family environment' is better expressed as 'to create a pleasant family environment' for clarity and correctness.

× Yes, I strongly agree with this. And I think that singing can bring happiness to people as it helps them to express their feeling by expressing their words and feelings into their voice.

✓ Yes, I strongly agree with this. I think that singing can bring happiness to people as it helps them to express their feelings by putting their words and feelings into their voice.

The word 'feeling' should be plural 'feelings' to agree with 'their'. Also, 'expressing their words and feelings into their voice' is awkward; 'putting their words and feelings into their voice' is clearer. The pronoun usage is corrected for agreement and clarity.