Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: In your answer, try to use complete sentences and correct grammar. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and unclear phrases such as 'improved my voi'. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, you can say, 'I like singing because it helps me relax and release stress after a busy day. Moreover, I enjoy singing with my friends because it makes me feel happy and improves my voice.'

Exemplo: I like singing because it helps me relax and release stress after a busy day. Moreover, I enjoy singing with my friends because it makes me feel happy and improves my voice.

Sugestão: Please use correct verb forms and sentence structure. Instead of 'never learn to singing', say 'never learned how to sing'. Also, explain your reason clearly and use linking words. For example, 'No, I have never learned how to sing because I am shy and not confident in front of others.'

Exemplo: No, I have never learned how to sing because I am shy and not confident in front of others.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and has many incomplete sentences. Try to give a clear and complete answer with supporting details. For example, 'I want to sing for my girlfriend because she is romantic. Singing for her can express my feelings and make our relationship stronger.'

Exemplo: I want to sing for my girlfriend because she is romantic. Singing for her can express my feelings and make our relationship stronger.

Sugestão: Your answer is confusing and does not directly respond to the question. Try to give a clear opinion and explain why. For example, 'Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it allows them to express emotions and enjoy music together.'

Exemplo: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it allows them to express emotions and enjoy music together.

× Yes, I like singing because it help me relax and release stress after busy work.

✓ Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and release stress after busy work.

The verb 'help' should be in the third person singular form 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. In English, verbs in the present tense add 's' or 'es' when the subject is third person singular.

× Also I enjoy singing with my friend or other.

✓ Also I enjoy singing with my friends or others.

The word 'friend' should be plural 'friends' and 'other' should be 'others' to correctly refer to multiple people. Using plural forms is necessary when talking about more than one person.

× Uh, it's making me feel happy an improved my. Voi. And.

✓ Uh, it makes me feel happy and improves my voice.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'It's making' should be changed to 'it makes' for present simple tense. 'An improved my. Voi. And.' is incorrect and should be corrected to 'and improves my voice' to form a complete and clear sentence.

× No, I never learn to singing.

✓ No, I have never learned to sing.

The verb 'learn' should be in the past participle form 'learned' with the auxiliary 'have' to form the present perfect tense. Also, 'to singing' is incorrect; it should be 'to sing' (infinitive form).

× And because I'm shy and I'm not confident in front of other.

✓ And because I'm shy and I'm not confident in front of others.

The word 'other' should be 'others' to correctly refer to other people. Also, 'in front of' is correct preposition usage here.

× I want to sing. For my girlfriend. Because he's a romantic with. Maine.

✓ I want to sing for my girlfriend because she's romantic with me.

The pronoun 'he's' is incorrect when referring to 'girlfriend'; it should be 'she's'. 'With Maine' is incorrect and should be 'with me'. Also, the sentence should be combined for clarity.

× We can move on feeling bearers.

✓ We can share our feelings.

The original sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. 'Move on feeling bearers' does not make sense. A clearer expression is 'We can share our feelings.'

× No. I think thinking can bring happiness to all.

✓ No. I think singing can bring happiness to all.

The word 'thinking' is incorrect in context; it should be 'singing' to match the topic. This is a misuse of pronouns or words.

× Be 'cause somebody poured down like to sing a song.

✓ Because somebody would like to sing a song.

The phrase 'poured down like' is incorrect. It should be 'would like to' to express desire. Also, 'Be 'cause' should be 'Because'.

× Uh, so we want to. Blue. She don't want to listen.

✓ Uh, so we want to sing, but she doesn't want to listen.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Blue' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or typo for 'sing'. 'She don't' should be 'she doesn't' for subject-verb agreement. The sentence should be combined for clarity.