Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer has some grammar and vocabulary mistakes, such as 'sending skills' instead of 'singing skills' and 'sync' instead of 'sing'. Try to use correct words and keep your sentences clear and concise. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer natural and effective. For example, you can say: "I don't consider myself a good singer and I don't usually enjoy singing, but occasionally I like to sing a song or two at karaoke bars."

Exemplo: I don't consider myself a good singer and I don't usually enjoy singing, but occasionally I like to sing a song or two at karaoke bars.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but contains some errors such as 'core' instead of 'choir' and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct vocabulary and structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. For example: "I haven't formally learned how to sing, but when I was young, I attended a music school where I joined the choir and sang several songs."

Exemplo: I haven't formally learned how to sing, but when I was young, I attended a music school where I joined the choir and sang several songs.

Sugestão: Your answer does not address the question and is not relevant. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. For example, you can say: "I would like to sing for my family and friends because it makes them happy and strengthens our bond."

Exemplo: I would like to sing for my family and friends because it makes them happy and strengthens our bond.

Sugestão: Your answer is too short and contains unclear phrases like 'Eat some kind of hobby'. Try to give a clear opinion and support it with reasons or examples using linking words. For example: "Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it allows them to express their emotions and enjoy music together."

Exemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it allows them to express their emotions and enjoy music together.

× While talking about sending skills, I don't really have it and I don't really like it, but from time to time if I have a chance to go to a karaoke bar to sync one or two songs, I really would be glad to do it.

✓ While talking about singing skills, I don't really have them and I don't really like it, but from time to time if I have a chance to go to a karaoke bar to sing one or two songs, I would really be glad to do it.

The word 'sending' is incorrect here; the correct verb form is 'singing' (verb + -ing form) to describe the activity. Also, 'sync' should be 'sing' as 'sync' means to synchronize, which is not appropriate in this context.

× While talking about sending skills, I don't really have it and I don't really like it, but from time to time if I have a chance to go to a karaoke bar to sync one or two songs, I really would be glad to do it.

✓ While talking about singing skills, I don't really have them and I don't really like it, but from time to time if I have a chance to go to a karaoke bar to sing one or two songs, I would really be glad to do it.

The word 'skills' is plural, so the pronoun referring to it should be 'them' instead of 'it' to maintain singular/plural agreement.

× Well, it's not exactly that I've been learning about how to sing, but when I was young I used to go to a musical school where we had a core and we sing some songs.

✓ Well, it's not exactly that I've been learning how to sing, but when I was young I used to go to a music school where we had a choir and we sang some songs.

The phrase 'learning about how to sing' is awkward; 'learning how to sing' is correct. 'Musical school' should be 'music school'. 'Core' is a misspelling of 'choir'. The verb 'sing' should be in past tense 'sang' to match the past context.

× Well, it's not exactly that I've been learning about how to sing, but when I was young I used to go to a musical school where we had a core and we sing some songs.

✓ Well, it's not exactly that I've been learning how to sing, but when I was young I used to go to a music school where we had a choir and we sang some songs.

The preposition 'about' is unnecessary after 'learning' in this context. The correct phrase is 'learning how to sing' without 'about'.

× Oh my gosh, what will happen to me if I didn't get the question?

✓ Oh my gosh, what will happen to me if I don't get the question?

The sentence mixes future tense 'will happen' with past tense 'didn't get'. To maintain correct tense agreement, 'didn't' should be 'don't' to match the future conditional structure.

× Yeah, of course. Eat some kind of hobby which brings joy and happiness to people.

✓ Yeah, of course. It's some kind of hobby which brings joy and happiness to people.

The original sentence 'Eat some kind of hobby' is incorrect and does not make sense. The correct sentence should use a verb like 'It's' to introduce the idea properly.