Chocolate— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to avoid repeating ideas and ensure subject-verb agreement, for example, 'dark chocolate, which usually have' should be 'dark chocolate, which I usually have'. Also, avoid incomplete sentences like 'since consuming too much sugar can increase'—increase what? Be specific. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy eating chocolate because it tastes delicious and helps lift my mood when I feel stressed. I especially like dark chocolate, which I usually have as a small treat after meals. However, I try not to eat it too often because consuming too much sugar can lead to health problems.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but has grammatical mistakes and lacks coherence. Avoid repeating phrases like 'as I mentioned earlier' in speaking tests. Also, use correct articles and plural forms, e.g., 'an excessive amount' and 'health problems'. Use linking words to explain your reasoning clearly.

Exemplo: I don't eat chocolate very often because consuming an excessive amount of chocolate or sugary items can cause health problems, such as diabetes.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but contains tense inconsistencies and some grammatical errors. Use past tense consistently when talking about the past, e.g., 'I found' instead of 'I find'. Also, avoid plural errors like 'a cavities'—it should be 'cavities'. Use linking words like 'however' appropriately to contrast ideas.

Exemplo: To be honest, I loved eating chocolate a lot when I was a kid because I found it very sweet and delicious. I used to enjoy it as a special treat after school or during celebrations. However, eating too much chocolate caused me to develop cavities in my teeth later on.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use singular/plural forms correctly, e.g., 'different parts of the world' and 'people' without 'a'. Also, use linking words like 'because' and 'as well as' properly to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: I think chocolates are popular in different parts of the world because they are very delicious and also serve as a great way to reward people when they achieve something good in their lives.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but contains redundancy and grammatical errors. Avoid using both 'although' and 'but' together; choose one. Also, say 'dark chocolate' without 'a'. Use comparative forms correctly, e.g., 'healthier than other chocolates'.

Exemplo: I mostly like dark chocolate. Although it is bitter, I think it is healthier than other chocolates because it does not contain much sugar.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear but has minor grammatical errors. For example, say 'if someone is fond of chocolate' without 'a'. Also, improve sentence flow by using linking words like 'because' instead of 'as'.

Exemplo: I think using chocolate as a gift can be a great idea, but it really depends on the person. For example, if someone is fond of chocolate, it would definitely be a thoughtful and appreciated present. Also, I believe chocolates are a nice way to reward children when they do something good because it makes them feel happy and motivated.

× I especially like dark chocolate, which usually have a small treat after a meal.

✓ I especially like dark chocolate, which usually has a small treat after a meal.

The relative pronoun 'which' refers to 'dark chocolate', which is singular, so the verb should be 'has' instead of 'have' to agree in number.

× However, I try to eat it too frequently since consuming too much sugar can increase.

✓ However, I try not to eat it too frequently since consuming too much sugar can increase health risks.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object after 'increase'. Also, 'try to eat it too frequently' is incorrect; it should be 'try not to eat it too frequently' to express limitation. Adding 'health risks' clarifies the meaning.

× As I mentioned earlier, I don't like to eat chocolate often because excessive amount of chocolate or any sugar items it will cause a health problems like diabetes.

✓ As I mentioned earlier, I don't like to eat chocolate often because an excessive amount of chocolate or any sugary items will cause health problems like diabetes.

'Excessive amount' needs the article 'an' before it. 'Sugar items' should be 'sugary items' to correctly describe items containing sugar. 'A health problems' is incorrect because 'problems' is plural; it should be 'health problems' without 'a'.

× To be honest, I loved eating chocolate a lot when I was a kid because I find it very sweet and delicious.

✓ To be honest, I loved eating chocolate a lot when I was a kid because I found it very sweet and delicious.

The sentence refers to a past time ('when I was a kid'), so the verb 'find' should be in the past tense 'found' to maintain tense consistency.

× However, eating too much chocolates caused me to develop a cavities and my teeth later on.

✓ However, eating too much chocolate caused me to develop cavities and problems with my teeth later on.

'Chocolate' is uncountable and should not be pluralized as 'chocolates' here. 'A cavities' is incorrect because 'cavities' is plural; the article 'a' should be removed. Also, 'my teeth' alone is incomplete; adding 'problems with' clarifies the meaning.

× I think that chocolates are quite popular in the different part of the world because it is very delicious as well as it's a great way to give a treat to a people whenever they achieve something good in their life.

✓ I think that chocolate is quite popular in different parts of the world because it is very delicious as well as a great way to give a treat to people whenever they achieve something good in their life.

'Chocolates' should be singular 'chocolate' when referring to the substance in general. 'The different part' should be 'different parts' to match plural. 'A people' is incorrect; 'people' is plural and does not need an article.

× Mostly I like a dark chocolate, although it's bitter, but I think it's quite healthier than the other chocolate because it does not contain that much sugar.

✓ Mostly I like dark chocolate; although it's bitter, I think it's quite healthier than other chocolate because it does not contain that much sugar.

Using both 'although' and 'but' together is redundant; one conjunction is sufficient. Also, 'a dark chocolate' should be 'dark chocolate' without 'a' as it is uncountable. 'The other chocolate' should be 'other chocolate' without 'the'.

× I think that using chocolate as a gift can be a great idea, but it really depends on a person.

✓ I think that using chocolate as a gift can be a great idea, but it really depends on the person.

'Depends on a person' is less natural; 'depends on the person' is more appropriate when referring to a specific individual in context.

× Also, I believe chocolates are a nice way to reward children when they do something good as makes them feel happy and motivated.

✓ Also, I believe chocolates are a nice way to reward children when they do something good as it makes them feel happy and motivated.

The sentence is missing the subject 'it' before 'makes'. Without it, the sentence is grammatically incorrect.